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7th Oct 2010 06:19 - 14 years ago
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Description : Remix27711 An original reworked. sometimes the hi-way is the best solution when good loving's gone bad.

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give Emann some feedback.

JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 21st Mar 2011 02:09 - 13 years ago
Okay, first, vocal need to come more forward. Second, the effects on your voice, I think, are causing your vocals to compete with you instruments at some points and there's some fading. I only notice because I've had to deal with the same prob :-)

All it might need is some changes in the panning. The farther away you separate two competing voices (sounds) the less they will clash. There are some other things you can do as well. I have an ebbok with suggestions for dealing with such a problem. If you wnat, I'll send it to you.

All The Best

John
Emann
Emann replied Unknown
Hi John, thanks for the specific input. I especially appreciate this type of review, which includes ideas to improve the song. I suppose it’s a bit obvious – I’m more of an old-school axe grinder – than a digital age techie. Nonetheless, I’m not proud to receive help whenever I can get it. I’d appreciate the ebook, and I’ll take into account all of your suggestions.
Thanks again, JB
goosemeyer
goosemeyer 19th Mar 2011 00:21 - 13 years ago
Great song Emann, has hints of Alice Cooper and some great guitar sounds. I agree with the others it has tremendous potential..

The drums are coming through a bit thin.. I listened on both flat response monitors and the average Bass boosted media player sound. also there seems to be some issues with the vocal. I'm not the most expert, but it seems recorded at too hot a level.The Looperman thread on spectrum analyzing changed everything for me, I think by leaps. I also use the EQ while it's up, and will eq a track that's fighting for headroom towards a different frequency, towards "The Bald Spots" so to speak. So there's not big clipping peaks at the lows and highs ( as a Geetar player, I scoop my mids, sometimes too much)
sure the loops here are great, but take advantage of the great tutorials in the forums.
I liked this and hope to hear it again.
Toby
Emann
Emann replied Unknown
Hi Toby, thanks for compliment: I’ve an old Al Cooper fan (one a the first ‘LPs’ I bought as as kid was ‘Million Dollar Babies’).
Also I appreciate the specific input. I especially appreciate this type of review, which includes ideas to improve the song. As I said to John (above)... ‘ I suppose it’s a bit obvious – I’m more of an old-school axe grinder – than a digital age techie. Nonetheless, I’m not proud to receive help whenever I can get it. I’ll check out your page and say ‘hello,’ and I’ll take into account all of your suggestions.
Thanks again, JB
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 15th Feb 2011 21:04 - 13 years ago
Needs a bit more mastering, but I am really digging your guitar work.

All The Best

John
Emann
Emann replied Unknown
Thanks for the nod, if you have any spedic tips, I'm all ear. all the best Jonathan
theHumps
theHumps 8th Oct 2010 23:45 - 14 years ago
I like the song idea, some really cool things going on here. I like the lead! Personally, I like to hear the vocals a little more centered in the mix, like how you centered the lead around 1 min. Just my opinion.

Overall I thought it was a cool track. Keep working on the mix, I think you could tweek it a bit more.

Wayne

Reply: Well I was thinking balanced centering. Not sure, but did you double the vocal track and seperate it or is it a stereo widening effect, a delay? I'll usually just widen the stereo field a bit and add a bit of reverb to my vocals , that's it.
Emann
Emann replied Unknown
Hi the Humps, thanks for the tips. I've listening what everyone has said and have edited the song each time. I understand when you say you'd like the voice more 'centered' you are talking about 'balance centering' (or pcenter of the song? laced in a different place) in . Thanks for taking the time to listen and to comment. emann

Replay: thanks for clarifying that for me. You're right, i sterio micked that voice (double tracked) and somewhere had read to balance the to 100% L &R. I'll edit the song again and give what you said a try. Thanks again, emann (this kind of comment is very useful)
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 7th Oct 2010 16:48 - 14 years ago
Nice guitar work on this one, nice ideas going on.
Emann
Emann replied Unknown
Thanks for your comment. I wrote when I was going through a difficult time. As I thought my 'relationship gone bad,' it made think that most people had suffered the way. Have a great day. Emann
Kikajon
Kikajon 7th Oct 2010 08:07 - 14 years ago
Hi Emann
Some really good guitar work here, nice chord progression and vocals.
If I may make some suggestions: less reverb effects on the vocals and some of the guitars – it's hard to separate the sounds and it gives an untight feeling. A bit more work on the production would make this song great.
Cheers
/pmk

Update: This second time around it sounds better and I like the lead guitar sound, Les Paul?. Keep it up.
Emann
Emann replied Unknown
Thanks for the possitive advice. No axcuse, but time always seems te an issue. Lately I've been rushed 'to just get the song finished,' and have permitted things that could have been improved, Maybe I'll edit this and clean it up a bit.

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