Dude I'm going to be honest cause I like what you do, but kill the auto tune and don't use it ever again! J/K ... (but I hate those freakin things) You got a good voice when you flo, but the singing is ... not so much! You need to get a better mic/pop screen and focus on the straight flo that you have and do some accapellas on here. I bet you'd get a lot of downloads. I'd use them if it was nice and clean and smooth cause your voice sounds that good to me... use what ya got man, and foget about the American Idol auditions!

mrbillionx is a hator,
he only likes rapper like marshell
or east coast hip hop, i like the track just because
i feel
the bigger pic stay kool dough boy

Very cool phrasing with your rap...poetic style. I think the chorus would sound alot better if it where just on point...the timing seemed off a little. Its a little off-key as well, just adjust those things and it'll sound alot better. Peace

Very heartfelt, a lot of soul in this. Your voice and flow has a lot of potential, I dig that relaxed vibe you have. I think that hook should be covered by a female voice brother, it'd add more flavor. To be honest the autotune wasn't my favorite part however the lyrics are deep, and I would enjoy collabing with you man. Hit me up at broken.scythe@yahoo.com and let me know what track of mine you'd like to try and just send some thoughts/ideas/lyrics on it and we'll go from there.
great track, really though
Peace to ya

I can feel the emotion in the lyrics and can feel that you put a lot into this. You have a decent voice to do vocals. It needs some work but all my tracks do too. So work on it some more and keep learning as you go. It's a long process so don't get discouraged, keep it fun. Don't be afraid to move on to the next idea for a while and give a project a rest, then come back at it later, fresh new mind on it with a new perspective.

Way to go man!

Wayne

yo man i really luv the track and the beat kills. if u're really this beatmaker, there 4 i still gat more 2 learn man. the piano is well played and the flow is nice.

you chorus part needs LOTS of work.

As for that robot part - work on that as well.

As far as the rap part goes it don't even sound like rap.

Yeah I would take this back to the drawing board - and get to
work seriously.

maybe make this an instrumental.

iight, certaintly a lot better on the verses. I actually likes those verses. Buuttt,,i see why yu dont sing often hahah, no offense. But yea good imprvement.

and btw. yu just made my week by saying i inspired you to do it again. I mean, over money, success, women-everything. The one thing i hope my lyics and music do is inspire, thats why i consider KiD CuDi as one of my biggest influences. I mean, people underrate cudder all the time, but the man just like, has this certain thing about him(nooo homoooo!!!) I can just relate to him.
But thank you, that meant a lot haha