Description : NOT finished.. Still working with it.. s
Intro in or out ???
Would like outstandig ears on it, while I'm working with it thanks.. Do You still like it, or has something to be changed/corrected???
LYRICS:
Spoken Words:
Sometimes we choose our coinsidences..
Sometimes the coinsidences choose us...
Sometimes we make the wrong choise...
Sometimes we listen to the wrong voice...
- Do things we might regret...
- As we can try to make better..
- If we haven't yet...
Hours of lust... You're standing there in the cold...
Hours of dust... You're want to make Your 'gold'..
Oh lord..
Preacher tell me what's wrong...
What's going on...
Make a wish.. to Your god.. Cause he might help.. and be Your guard..
You get a cold there... in the rain...
and try to avoid the enormously pain...
Harrr...
Oh lord..
Powers with must.. You want to change Your role..
(Absolute powers... You HAVE to do this and that (in this song sexually...)
Powers in fust... You're underserving Your soul...
(The story: Men want sex nearly no matter where with hookers and want to control them with power... very often undecent places, where the smell and hygiejne isn't good...) That's fx. fust...
Oh lord..
Some more lyrics, when time and after the reviews.. s
Very, very nice track. The soft "jazzy" drums are fantastic with the spacey atmospheric pads. And the sparkling, echoing keys are a perfect compliment to your warm, mellow vocals. And the lyrics are excellent as well. I wouldn't change a thing, girl ~ it's perfect as it stands.
Thank You so much dear.. Guess Sumper will be happy to know, You like his choise of drums and so on.. And so happy to know, You like the lyrics and voice.. Means a lot to me, people notice the work with lyrics and voice nicely and like them/it..
Alright Stina, lets listen and review simultaneously... Keep the intro definitely. percussion is solid and well mixed. Love this feeling, your vox add so much to this. Love the vocal play with you and the pads. Good choice of bass and instruments all around. Solid :)
Thank You so much dear for the very nice compliments.. ☺ Kind of You.. Sumper has now made a profile in here, so hope he also will read Your very nice words concerning the bass and instruments..
hey Stina, I like this soundscape and your voice fits right in. I really like the low pitched, semi spoken parts, creates a very special mood. Good stuff.
Ha det gott
/pmk
A very atmospheric piece. Quite dark, especially given the content of the lyrics. I like the intro, I think it is just fine. I can't imagine what you would change. Faved.
You have a great voice, perhaps, we can do a track together in the future. I'm already currently involved in 3 collabs at the time.
Thank You so much for Your very kind and nice review dear.. and the nice compliment concerning my voice.. ☺ I am flattered.. And would be nice to collaborate yes.. I'm also working with several nice collaborations, so that's the same.. ☺
I still like it, but personally, I would leave the higher pitched voice on the intro out from 5 seconds to 12 seconds. That's just my opinion though. I do like the spoken word that you have after the intro, I think its great. You have such good vocals. Very nice job. Would you care to either post or e-mail your lyrics. I am having a little trouble understanding them. Not your fault, my ears sometimes can't pick vocals/lyrics out of songs. I just think it's a great track and once I read the vocals I'll beable to hear them. You've got a really really nice track here and I like it alot. Very nice job on everything. Take Care, Gord
Your lyrics and vocals are perfect. They are not messy at all. It all fits together nicely. You have a well thought out and well produced track that I enjoyed listening to.
Take Care, Gord
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Description : Feel free to check out the lyrics video on YT as well :) This is a new track based on the great vocals by Ashes and Dreams! Again, a mix of electronic/progressive/rock, any feedback is welcome
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Description : BIG UPDATE 26/02/2014 - So, this was an 18 min track that I have now successfully split in two. 2nd half I uploaded a few weeks ago (Things That Should Always Be, with the bouncy 2 min reggae intro). This is the first half, which has a new mix, a mega chill, meditative ending and a little jazz thrown in for good measure. Takes a few minutes for beat to really kick in. Constantly evolving electric guitar, bass guitar, acoustic drums and lead banjo driven by fat, busy 80BPM grooves with a bit of a reggae and shuffle feel. Also: synth choir voices, dulcimer, violin, cello, shimmering pads. Builds up gradually to nice and rocking and then gets taken back down for the big comedown chill. I really don't know what sort of genre this is except 'far out'. I think it sounds more like a live band than one guy playing instruments and manipulating a DAW. Not my best track but a bit of blissful, sunny island fun. Real positive vibe here so I hope you give it a chance to unfold and unfurl. Sit back, clear your schedule and immerse yourself in these trippy sonic experiments cooked up deep in my off-planet underground laboratory. I have to send the MP3 to Earth via space courier (not cheap).
Description : This is the 2nd cover of Big Audio Dynamite i done With my freind John. We both fan of the band so we decided to do a challenge and produce a serie of covers. we done 4 in one month. each track got it proper video check my youtube channel indiegroundvid
Very, very nice track. The soft "jazzy" drums are fantastic with the spacey atmospheric pads. And the sparkling, echoing keys are a perfect compliment to your warm, mellow vocals. And the lyrics are excellent as well. I wouldn't change a thing, girl ~ it's perfect as it stands.
Peace and love,
Mike
Ha det gott
/pmk
Tack det samma til ha det så bra.. s
Hugs Stina..
You have a great voice, perhaps, we can do a track together in the future. I'm already currently involved in 3 collabs at the time.
All The Best
John
Your lyrics and vocals are perfect. They are not messy at all. It all fits together nicely. You have a well thought out and well produced track that I enjoyed listening to.
Take Care, Gord
Is it okay with the lyrics now written to the song?, or is it too messy... Tried to make lines (enter...), but stands like that now ...