although the verses were short I think I managed to make it sound clean.(Delay can be your best friend lol)
Thanks bro, great collab, hit me up if youd like another.
EDIT:Ok so I raised the main melody, thinned the bass just a touch, RAISED those vocals and threw in a very different break after the 3rd verse. This is now finished I believe, I tried my best to do as much as I can to add to this collab with my current skill palette as a producer.
Look out for another one by us with fitted verses by my man Lucky Feather soon.
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Haha thanks Dave, maybe when we chill you can show me what youd do with the vox?
Yes! bro im so down, lol Ive been trying to FB chat you but I think you go idle. And you I always tell you bro, even if you just want someone to listen in, send me that link bro. Im always down to listen to some Yesh heat haha.
Sunday bro, im thinking sunday. You open for that?
dude it sounds a bit more like a rap rather than an echo but i love em both my man haha and to DBL thanks my buddy. i hope your right about me getting better i say broken here kicked sum @ss haha on the mixing of this track
Heya guys, I love this one, saw your name of broken scythe and Ive been on to lucky's pellas for a few days now, and this one has all the feel to it i expected and wanted. cheers, im glad its out here. Very curious which way it will improve if you continue! as for a few tips i thought could be useful: the city street effect, or something which gives me that feel through reverb, its totally awesome, only I wish the voice would come out clearer/louder. Also around 3.05 it becomes a bit floaty, its not bad in general but I would love to have something vivid breaking through it at some point, sort of a flashback into the common kinda thing. What happens at 4.10, but more breaking and slashing. I hope this vague impressionistic feedback helps a tiny bit, this is good cause. thnx for sharing
after song is finished, i can't playback the melody in my mind clearly anymore. I say if the melody would stand out a bit more and the bass would be tiny bit thinner, it would make the whole track lighter and exposed, but the bass is a beauty too, so it shouldn't get compressed away or sumthin either.
Lol wow, thanks Neon. i didnt know I had a small rep lol. Yeah I think the reverb fits well. Im actually implementing your advice, the vox is going up, Im going to try and rework the break, thin the bass just a tad and raise the main guitar melody. Ill let you know when im done! thanks for the great rev! im hitting one of your tracks in a sec!
Peace to you.
dude i love it. haha this song is awesome. i love every thing about it. it is really huanting. i am always down to do new track. just point out a track id ill try my best to right a rap that can suit the song at hand.. btw can i upload this to my page or no. up to you bro
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Description : Let me know what you guys think of this beat! I did not make the melodies for this song, LilTiddy created the two loops. I created the drums such as the 808, Kicks, Hi-Hates, Snares and claps. I also Mixed and Mastered the Instrumental.
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Description : I found this old track from 2013. A collab with looperman member Mr1Black.I used RarCharm vocals on the hook.MrBlack sent me his dry vocals and I mixed them in with the track..not the best job on mixing the vocals, or the beat but ,I still like it.
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THIS BEAT SOUNDS EPIC WITH THE VOX!!
luv all the effects you've got goin' on
it sounds epic, you just need to EQ the vox
a bit.
Delay works nicely too!
keep it up fam!
let's kick it soon bro
i've got so many tracks on me desktop
that i haven't finished
maybe i'll send you one and see what we can cook
up ahahaha
Much Respect from LA
Yes! bro im so down, lol Ive been trying to FB chat you but I think you go idle. And you I always tell you bro, even if you just want someone to listen in, send me that link bro. Im always down to listen to some Yesh heat haha.
Sunday bro, im thinking sunday. You open for that?
after song is finished, i can't playback the melody in my mind clearly anymore. I say if the melody would stand out a bit more and the bass would be tiny bit thinner, it would make the whole track lighter and exposed, but the bass is a beauty too, so it shouldn't get compressed away or sumthin either.
Peace to you.
10/10 haha