Your voice is great, I think that your mic is a bit off? a bit... scratchy? eh,
I love the instrumental and the "yea" after the yellow green red that the girl says, it's sweet.
Your rapping is great, I agree with the others that the beat got lost a little, but you kept it going and it turned out pretty sweet.
2face did a good job rapping too!I think that 2face has the 50 cent thing, with the overlapping voice. it's good. do more with effects I think... like, lil more overlapping, it'd be good. and a mic... that maybe captures your vocal depth? cus ive heard your other stuff and the vocals are more deep, whcih is reaaally great. :D
Keep it coming. ....looperman insisted I be constructive, so here we are. :)

Whats up man. Lyrics are really nice. I would have to say that your flow could be alittle tighter and def work some eq on that mic it sounds alittle flat. I really gotta give you proops for keepin it clean. I respect that even though I may not always follow it myself lol. Well done though man. Fix that mic and tighten your flow and you'll be hard to catch!

A great piece there but for the first half, you almost killed the rhythmic pattern. A little bit of mixing too would make that track better. Keep going !!!! You willa make it fissure !!!

Pretty sweet man!
Good lyrics man, maybe work on your mix a bit. Maybe its just the mic

Keep Em Coming!

Cheers
Kenny Lee

yeah i lik dis ur gd well done

This is fantastic. You have a great voice for rap, my friend, but me thinks you can probably sing as well.

Keep them coming

John

Tight beat..lyrics go in deep... at time it seems like you might have lost the beat a bit but while putting the verse down, it still came in dope though...track is tight!

I like the track, especialy the singing part and the vocal efects

Hey I am really diggin this beat. This track has a very chill out vibe. The flow is pretty tight, its nice to hear rap without a bunch of cursing. Thats art to me. Ha ha it seems most people who rap cant find that last word for their lyrics so they just say *****

dope man!!diggn the track!!flow is tight!!word up!!keep doin whatcha do maaaaane!!

At 1st i thought the track would be lame cause of the title the production was hot the 1st and 2nd wasn't that got 3rd i like the the use of the adlips and like flow was smooth
Much love keep working

Well, this is pretty good. But i agree, the lyrics weren't too great, but i did like how you harmonized the words. Most people just forget about doing that. it was decent.

tight track i dont like the lyrics too muchbut the beat is bangin for real man i like it

Nice man I like it

YO,CQ YOU HAVENT NOT MEANT ME BUT I AM YOUNGLEO, THE VICE OF THE GROUP YOUR LYRICS ARE GREAT MAN AND I CO-MEND YOU ON RAP'IN WITH OUT THE CURS'IN BUT YOU REALLY HAVE POTENTIAL, NEED WRK RAP'IN ON BEAT THO OTHER THAN THAT BRO CONGRATS, AND WELCOME TO THE GROUP!