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6th Nov 2010 14:40 - 14 years ago
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Description : So yeah, to cut it short, this track is nowhere near finished. I'm just wondering if anyone wants to try and spit on this.. not literally, that would be kinda nasty.

So this little emotional piano of mine was made with kore player, and took me the past 2 days to get perfect. I eventually settled on a sad melody, lots of notes all bieng played at once.

The "strings" at the start are actually made with fl keys rhode preset ran through a load of effects.

I think I have about 14 or 15 different drum sounds in this track, took me a while to arrange them all.

Anyways, I hope you like the track, and if you want to rap over it, feel free to mention it in a review.

Ste :)

Comments (11)

If you have time take a listen and give StephenPotter some feedback.

Nosleeves
Nosleeves 16th Aug 2011 22:28 - 13 years ago
is good to hear form u again,and a hip hop track is something new and improve.
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied 16th Nov 2011 - 13 years ago
Nice to hear from you too mate, glad to be back on the site and actually bieng part of a community. Its just not the same on Facebook or YouTube.

Glad to see you, even if I am 3 months late in terms of replying xD
Samoi08
Samoi08 4th Jun 2011 20:54 - 13 years ago
HEEY MAN I WAS BOUNCING TO THAT, and then it just stops lol...Good start so far man, liking it very much, let me know when u drop the full track i wanna hear it

keep it up

peace!
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied Unknown
Sorry for the late reply, but I'm glad you enjoyed the track! Will definatly try to make it longer in the future though.

Ste :D
mattjkb
mattjkb 19th Apr 2011 03:36 - 14 years ago
nice work so far. I can tell you've spent a lot of time on the melody and arrangement.
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied Unknown
Yeah, the melody took a fair while, I think I spent about 3 hours straight just tweaking it. Pretty fun to create though.

Thanks for listening!

Ste :D
EmergeAndSee
EmergeAndSee 12th Mar 2011 05:30 - 14 years ago
Sick track, I had some spare time so I just looped the ending and made a short rap with it. Check it out and tell me what you think:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/98985
It's not amazing or anything but I think its ok. If you need anything else just ask :)
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied Unknown
Damn, that was quick. Nicely done though, just make sure you ask permission to use it, like I said in the review though, I don't mind you doing it here, but other members will almost certainly want you to ask first. That bieng said, that was pretty good :)

Thanks for the review/download/making your own song out of it!

Ste :D
K1Clean
K1Clean 20th Feb 2011 05:46 - 14 years ago
Feelin it. Does not sound sad to me. More uplifting to my ears. I would "spit" on it as you say. But track to short. Need atleast 2mins. You wanna draw it out some. Send it on over keith89115@yahoo.com . Whether you loop it back or whatever. This beat vibes with my current affairs. So hopefully sooner than later. Or any other beat, you'd like some vocal to.
Nice work, keep it movin.
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied Unknown
i think I need to change the title, I got a rapper now, I just haven't been able to update the track.

Ste :)
djgraehulc
djgraehulc 10th Feb 2011 01:21 - 14 years ago
You should have gave us more of the track. I hate when people only give you a minute of a song because they think it's hot. Yeah I liked how it sounded but I expected at least 2-3 minutes of a track so I can get the feel of where that producer is coming from. But anyway "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied Unknown
I don't think its all that good though, only reason it is so short is because I need feedback so I can finish the full thing, 'cause I don't want to repeat the same 8 bars over and over again.
WeazelBeats
WeazelBeats 2nd Feb 2011 15:02 - 14 years ago
got a pretty good flow indeed ste ;)
the melody doesn't sound all that sad to me though lol

I can hear you took your time on those drums, that's nice!

I really hope you do find a rapper for this mate ;)

peace
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied Unknown
I did find a rapper, so I do need to change the title in that aspect, but I think the files are all on my laptop, not my computer, so I need a usb stick now :P

Thanks for the review!

Ste :D
Theorist
Theorist 7th Dec 2010 00:25 - 14 years ago
i like it mate... you got a nice sound and i kick it to the limits pro-found... :) am in th uk though whichmay be a littl difficult...lol
Mosaic
Mosaic 13th Nov 2010 09:19 - 14 years ago
G'day Ste

Mate this is sounding very sweet, whens the long version coming, please soon, so loved what I have just heard, looking forward to the vocals and the longer version...You better up load the full version after seeing your comment back Spiv lol...Peace mate...Estefano...
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied Unknown
Just need to make a few adjustments, send it to deltaaah, and once he approves I'll upload a longer version on here. Its probably gonna undergo a ton of changes, but at least that means I can take more advice on the way.

Thanks for the review!

Ste :)
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 6th Nov 2010 19:31 - 14 years ago
This has a wonderful groove to it! The drums are great so far! Really nice piano riffs! Hope to hear it again when it's finished! Great work!
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied Unknown
I hope to upload the full version soon as well, I doubt this tracks gonna stop, I've got deltaah doing vocals (hopefully) and I've still got to add more sounds.

I'll let you know if I upload the full version (I really hope I do).

Thanks for the review!

Ste :)
deltaaah
deltaaah 6th Nov 2010 15:46 - 14 years ago
Already writing lyrics. If you want me to send some acapellas, let me know. Love the feeling of this, wish there was more so I can get a feel for a verse and chorus. Sounds good Ste!
StephenPotter
StephenPotter replied Unknown
Thanks, I'm amazed at how quick you've managed to get going on this. I'll add more to it soon, but I think I'm gonna keep repeating the piano for a while and then change it afterwards.

Thanks for the review and the vocal offer!

Ste ;)

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