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14th Nov 2010 03:04 - 14 years ago
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Description : Well, no one wanted to collab on my 'If I Die Young' track, so i just wrote two more verses and got a beat with a chorus on it and finished the track myself. Track produced by Mister KA, hook by Gravity. Let me know what you guys think of this one.

Chorus:
Wasted, I live in a world where nothings sacred,
My minds wasted, nothing will change until Im famous.
Be strong, God I'm almost there, but can I be a happy man?
One nightmare from happyland.
One nightmare from happyland.

Comments (30)

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CuzzinCoo
CuzzinCoo 24th Jun 2013 06:19 - 11 years ago
cnt believe no1 wanted 2 hop on is with ya. u killed that tho homie!
TonyKnight
TonyKnight 10th Dec 2011 00:31 - 13 years ago
Sounds great, I like the harmonies. The rap is a little more than I can easily follow, but I'm not versed in the genre. It's catchy and it moves. TK
AllenV
AllenV 9th Dec 2011 23:16 - 13 years ago
I love that the melody rides so well through the track and The vocals are great,pro for sure.

Allen
OmarMuk
OmarMuk 9th Dec 2011 18:38 - 13 years ago
Daaaammmnnnn!!!
And like Spiv said..its all already been said
From the chorus to the verses to the production.
Great Work!!
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 9th Dec 2011 18:24 - 13 years ago
What can I say that hasn't been said already?! Crazy flow on the raps! Awesome arrangement and fills! On my system I'm getting some distortion on the beats, but it's still very effective. Well done!
Planetjazzbass
Planetjazzbass 9th Dec 2011 05:29 - 13 years ago
Cool stuff man!.....awesome vocalisation!....bloody excellent! cheers Planet
PidgeonAt
PidgeonAt 7th May 2011 16:58 - 13 years ago
Wat a tune udone well the rapper sounds well like twista wat a banger
Gabz
Gabz 2nd May 2011 19:03 - 13 years ago
Very professional one! This is other level.

Great vocal, def looks like Twista ahah what's awesome!

Faved
Excellent work 10/10

Gabz
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 30th Apr 2011 03:46 - 13 years ago
Damn. Professional eork here, my friend, track is off the wall great.

Faved

John
digitalSKYY
digitalSKYY 27th Apr 2011 21:34 - 13 years ago
Daaaamn. This is siiiick
Sounstar
Sounstar 5th Mar 2011 17:52 - 13 years ago
Nice track my man, well done. You should get into a remix, I'd collab with you
Music4Life
Music4Life 3rd Mar 2011 16:15 - 13 years ago
Yo Vizun, this track is crazy! I love the flow throughout the track. You have big-time skills, my friend. I'm impressed. Who came up with the yelling parts throughout the track? It was a great touch. I see a big future for you, my friend.

I'm going to download this.

Great Job.
YungZo
YungZo 1st Mar 2011 09:55 - 13 years ago
"C i wanna talk to tha future before tha wrong losers start ta confust ya"

thats how u start a fuckin 16 bruh came proper OFF TOP
DextDee
DextDee 1st Mar 2011 09:08 - 13 years ago
mm now that is what we call flow. and hard flow. man this is tight.
awesome message there too. u are getting faster every time i hear u.
awesome track overall. respect

DextDee
CWarren
CWarren 1st Mar 2011 00:30 - 13 years ago
Sup bro? Haven't heard from u in a minute. This joint go hard as hell bro. Yo flow is sick as hell bro. Automatic Fav.

_C-DUB_
Lazynick
Lazynick 15th Jan 2011 14:34 - 14 years ago
Well bro ! Ur flow is truly professional....keep do ya thang..best of luck for future..
Mrbillionx
Mrbillionx 14th Jan 2011 19:13 - 14 years ago
Real pro style on this one.
I think I can listen to this all day on replay.

keep strong and never forget being you always comes first.
DJSchmeeJ
DJSchmeeJ 14th Jan 2011 12:36 - 14 years ago
very nice work fam! Can't believe nobody wanted to collab with you on this...oh well, seems to have worked out better for you! Great Flow....great track!
Dylex
Dylex 13th Jan 2011 08:10 - 14 years ago
this track sounds clean great job man
SweeneyMusic
SweeneyMusic 2nd Jan 2011 22:47 - 14 years ago
That chorus is catchy as hell! And the verses are holding the rest of the track together until we are graced with another chorus. Would love to do a collab with you, man! Keep at it
HustlerbyNature
HustlerbyNature 31st Dec 2010 17:42 - 14 years ago
dam homie i love this track!!! keep doin ya thang!!!!
FinesseNV
FinesseNV 1st Dec 2010 15:49 - 14 years ago
I would've definitely rocked this with you... shits dope fam
CONEYISLANDRECORDS
CONEYISLANDRECORDS 25th Nov 2010 20:15 - 14 years ago
Wow,...very nice track. Dig everything about. Rawness man. Faved easily.
EDaGuttababy
EDaGuttababy 24th Nov 2010 19:27 - 14 years ago
yeah sounds like a professional recording nice spitgame who made that beat its sick

www.edaguttababy.com www.reverbnation.com/edaguttababy
Blazingtear
Blazingtear 23rd Nov 2010 21:22 - 14 years ago
great voice and rap man it is realy great and a radio track for sure !!!!! keep it up i take your name in my profile (My Influences / Fav Artists)

thx for being here!

cheers blaze
WhiteSands
WhiteSands 16th Nov 2010 23:00 - 14 years ago
damn bro this ones ready for the radio! this beat is pretty sick so is that chorus. so u down to do a collab on maybe a more rnb pop sounding track?
Iolakana
Iolakana 15th Nov 2010 10:43 - 14 years ago
bradah imma bump if ya dont mind i wanna bump this sh&# in my truck i wont download until i get permission but song is off the chain fiyah fiyah question how long was the mic smoking after this song lol love it

God Bless
Becca
Becca 15th Nov 2010 02:27 - 14 years ago
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW OMG I cannot believe how much u remind me of Twista, This is crazy . I have heard alot of good rappers on this site, but nothing like this. I think ur def# 1 . Def goin on favs and checking out more of ur tracks
OneVizun
OneVizun replied Unknown
Thank you so much. Im glad u enjoyed this track and I truly appreciate ur compliment.
Hypnozizz
Hypnozizz 14th Nov 2010 23:56 - 14 years ago
How much did it cost to hire Twista for your track? Haha! Great job on this one. Amazing quality.
OneVizun
OneVizun replied Unknown
LOL Didnt cost me a penny. Thanks for listening. glad u like it.
lendy
lendy 14th Nov 2010 06:45 - 14 years ago
Nasty flow,awesome track bro,great job peace Lendy Len

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