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24th Nov 2010 00:50 - 14 years ago
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Description : Updated, remixed with new guitars, vocals and harmony, better ending

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give Jeff05C some feedback.

eshar
eshar 19th Jul 2011 02:16 - 13 years ago
You've certainly got all the right ingredients here. I understand what others have said about the drums, but actually I don't mind that they aren't too far forward.
This is a great song...love your vocals.

Elaine
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied 11th Feb 2012 - 13 years ago
Thanks very much, I'm trying to work on the singing. It's very new to me so the encouragement is helpful. I do agree with most that the drums need to come up and bass would help.

Thanks

JC
MWRatridge
MWRatridge 18th Jul 2011 14:51 - 13 years ago
Enjoyed. Great chops and voxx. May I suggest as a fellow guitarist/vocalist, do not neglect the other instruments? Your guitar and vocals sound greatly mastered in the mix but no bottom end at all. Is there bass guitar present? Sorry man I did enjoy and writing wise it gets thumbs up but it sounds unfinished.
Rat.
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied 11th Feb 2012 - 13 years ago
I hear the other instruments comment, I'm not great at finishing things, have to work on that! One day I'll give this song the attention I should. Thanks for listening.

JC
ShowGunProductions
ShowGunProductions 8th Jun 2011 21:26 - 13 years ago
Nice work man! I really dig your guitars and your voice! I might bring the drums up alittle. Keep it up!
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown
The "plan" is to redo the whole darn thing. With live drums rocking out.

jc
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 18th Mar 2011 00:33 - 14 years ago
Very enjoyable track with a kicka$$ ending.

Totally enjoyed

John
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown
Thanks for checking it out (for ever ago) haven't been on for a while.
Thanks!
Jeff
AllenV
AllenV 4th Dec 2010 14:17 - 14 years ago
Great tune Jeff..yes,you know about the drums already but your guitars kick ass,I especially loved the slide or was that an fx? and your vocals are great!

Allen
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown
Wow, thanks a lot. Thats good ol fashion slide x2. thanks on the vocals, that's the part that is really hard for me.

cheers
jeff
Vicen
Vicen 24th Nov 2010 07:04 - 14 years ago
Has won a lot. The sound is killer and I think much clearer. Bone I like even more ... What a finish by the way!
I am here for the next version with other drums ... total, it is also my favorite.
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown
Cheers buddy, I have a version with live drums now, but there is a bit in the middle that goes off the rails a bit so might see if i can get that recorded again.
thanks again.
jeff
Kikajon
Kikajon 24th Nov 2010 00:57 - 14 years ago
Hey, I think you could crank up the drums a bit. But, wicked rockin' guitar and I like this tune a lot!
A fav.
/pmk
Jeff05C
Jeff05C replied Unknown
I hear that, the drums are some what of an afterthought. maybe I'll get some live drums recorded for it.

thanks for the comment

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