Pretty sweet. The volume seems quite low..
That piano progression...that comes in in the background every once in a while...is DEFF almost the exact sounding piano i had put to an electronic project i did a long time ago.

Imma see if i can find it to show you.
Good one!

Cheers
Kenny Lee

nice one M4L

The intro is fine, uplifting melodies and techno beats....great combination, maybe you could make the track a bit longer with some variations or filtering of parts.....and keep the progressiveness.

well done
Trax

I think the beginning is perfect but I like a long build up. Pretty cool, there is some contrast and some very catchy synth

I saw that I already listened to this track last month...
Why didn't I review it before ? lol

I love how the vibes of the instruments in this track are so different from eachother. It has the 'nervous' breaks, the chill out synths in the back, the rough 303 kinda sound and the happy riff playing throughout the track.

and still everything works together nicely
good work

I think the only thing you can still improve in this track is the ending, it's a bit sudden...

peace

sounds like something dat wuld go wit a fighting game

This is a cool fusion of styles! You can get some good results combining tracks like this! I like the synth sounds you used very much! Great work!

I'll echo back your statement, I don'r beklieve this was three different unfinished tracks :-) Great job. Sounded like one coherent whole to me. Never would have imagined its origins.

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John

Yeah man, Im feeling this intro. Gets you pumped for whats coming. The sounds all mix well. I like how you transition into everything. It sounds like your bouncing back and forth between ideas, like thoughts. I dig that the perc is unique. I think that at 140 it starts getting repetitive, so right there would be a great spot to throw in a breakdown.
Maybe single out the background synth and have the perc on a low bypass filter, then just slowly build that up and have the melodies come in one by one. should be like a 16 bar deal you know? make it hang there then just bring it alll back.
Solid work man, look forward to the finished vers.

Haha trust me, the intro isnt even close to too long. I get crap for mine being too long all the time, and yours wasnt nearly as long. I like the sounds, its very interesting, i like the uniqueness of it. Very good as is, but if you were to make any changes you could make it longer with either a slow breakdown then fast buildup or vice versa, also the abrubt ending could be fixed. But its a great song, good job and keep up the good work! -Gabe

Peace Love Jesus!