The drums! Where are the drums? Lol! Yeah you should definitely work on defining the drums a bit as they get buried in there.
The brass section is extremely well put together however it's to centered. The strings have the same problem. You gotta leave that middle space available for the vocalist.
If you widen the brass and the strings you'll get a bigger sound and definitely have a lot of room in there for the drums and anything that might come after wards.
Great work on this one! I agree with Manzet... the drums need a bit more bottom... alittle more "boom" for emotion and power. Bring the level up and compress a bit but watch the headroom (allow enough room for vocals over top).
thanks man that was just a rough draft ill get clean it up some more. What do mean about the break for the verse? sorry probably a dumb question im just gettin started with this
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The brass section is extremely well put together however it's to centered. The strings have the same problem. You gotta leave that middle space available for the vocalist.
If you widen the brass and the strings you'll get a bigger sound and definitely have a lot of room in there for the drums and anything that might come after wards.
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