I loke the whole arrangement, rich sound. Keep up the good work. God Bless

this is pretty good dude, maybe at the chorus you could get like a girl singing the chorus and then you rap and the beat is preety kool

keep it up

Whats up man. Def stick to rap and don't worry about singing. I think with alittle practice your going to be one of the best rappers on the loop. Your young so you got time. I am really impressed with what you put together for only being 13. Keep it up man!

You remind me of a younger version off me. Always hustling I'm looking forward on how you improve.

Keep Hustling

Alcraine

P.S You always have that static fix that maybe compressors. OR cut frequencies off

Redo the song over and then put it up

Solid beat from DollarMenunaire. Although the singing is shakey, you have an interesting style of rapping, which i enjoyed. Keep working at it man. You're young, i wish i got started when i was 13! I look forward to hearing your progress, just keep makin the music you love and it'll fall into place over time. All the best man,
Brent

This is amazing from someone so young!
Watch this space,and you'll probably hate me for this comment,BUT,watch out Justin Bieber,you have an alter ego!

......I don't think vocals are your thing man. You need a lot, and I mean TONS of practice. Intention is definitely there, kudos for that.

i don't know what to say but try using autotune on your voice when u sing. also, the rap has potential but needs better EQ changes. Don't give it up though man, you could be famous one day yaknow?

Beat is ok.
Raps are quite cool (reminds me a little bit of the Streets... UK-HipHop from France.)
But Bro: Kick out the singing passages and concentrate on your raps and your flow.

Hold on.. rewind.. stop everything. I'm hearing the beginning of a future star in this track. Admittedly there are production issues but listen to that rapping on it's own. Cancel everything else out. I'm getting quite an accomplished flow going on here. You understand how a rap should come across. Loving the effects on the rap portions of this song. The way that the sound is thrown about in my ears to emphasise certain words. It's there with that beat banging behind it.

There is quite a lot of noise on the vocal track(s).. I'd recommend playing around with the mic input level until there is more of your voice in there than background noise.

Overall though a solid effort in my opinion. Look forward to hearing more from you in the near future James :)

No ur not a rapper or singer sorry bro

Too many people want to rap and sing these days straight with no practice...

As hardwareexorcist sayed . Your vocal is so messed up . Its like taking a mic and scream into it . :(

DOPE!! im feeling this ! dont forget to check out my track and leave your reviews as well.

let's start with the positives first. you've got a good feel for the rhythm and how to make that work. you added the backing vocals in very good places and the work well with the main track.

now most of your negatives are on a technical side and those improve with time, so let's get those out of the way. the vocals are way to high in the mix, so much so they over power the music track. again, the problems with volume levels and learning how to EQ out dead frequencies will come with time and practice. there's also a lot of hiss in some of tracks and it's hard to tell if they're coming from the effect you used or someplace else. those can be dealt with by editing your effect parameters and EQ.

your non-technical issues are solely pitch. your ability to maintain the proper pitch not only in relation to the music, but to yourself needs a considerable amount of work. this is something that can only be overcome with lots of practice and hard work. if getting singing lessons is beyond your means, perhaps you can find another vocalist to help coach you to improve your technique. once again, you're in a great place to get help:) don't get too down on yourself, man. we all had to start somewhere and, like i said, your issues aren't anything that can't be overcome with practice and patience. ask for help where you feel like you need it, the people here have great advice and can help you grow leaps and bounds.