Lovin it! I agree with everyone else, the lyrics have a gloomy vibe to it, but that's what makes em special :) Once again, great job!

This song feels so gloomy...and I like it! :)

love it, chorus is dope shorty...

Really nice song. Love the chord progression on the song. The vocals are good too.

A little advice on the vocals. You have a good voice, but you seem like you may be holding back a bit (maybe you worry about bothering the neighbors). My advice would be to sing this like you would sing it driving in your car. In other words, if you had this song playing on the radio and you were singing along to it while driving down the road....sing it like that when you record. I think you will surprise yourself.

You have mad raw talent, and it's time to take it to the next level. The heck with the neighbors ;)

Good job Kerry, really good job.

Bear

I agree that the vocals blend so well with the somber mood and the emotion of the song.It's so great when the lyrics&music together really do reflect the mood intended,it shows your own intent at being the really great artist you are.

Very Good!
Allen

Very bittersweet and somber mood you create with your vocals..lovin the vibe and atmosphere on this track.great track.

RawHead }:)-

vocals on the tracks sort of have a dark feel to them, goes well with the music. good job, cool song