Really sad melody. Liked its heaviness and emotions. Keep it up bro

dope beat, heavy swing, underground fo sho, but definately at the end of eight bars when you drop into your hook and when you drop in the drum line then you should try to cut the begginning of the loop at the fist 1 to 2 secs of the intro, it'll give it a nice lead into the other layers of the beat. just a suggestion..

also, agreed with calico to a point..I would phase those hihats in and out depending on where youre at in the sequence, like hi hats for the last 8 bars of the verse and a different hi hat loop in the hook but not in the first part of the verse cause you switch your melody up so much during the hook. peace

Mos'

Try dropping the hats from this one. see how that sounds. I feel that when i DON'T use hats it gives the track a more OMINOUS feel. creates a bit of " looseness" People tend to ease back and listen to the strings or piano more. Just a suggestion... I'm loving your work man. Let's collab bro!!

The delayed piano fits in the track really well here, yayo!