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25th May 2008 10:20 - 16 years ago
Description : I've been using reason 4 for about 4/5 months now and after a lot off messing about i've finally made my first track.
let me know what you think and any feedback would be great.
Hope you enjoy!

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give davesmith1983 some feedback.

Mosaic
Mosaic 22nd May 2010 12:12 - 14 years ago
Hey Mate

What a trippy piece, in a good way, arrangement is good, like the way that you have arranged the synths, some sound like midi files but all working together so good, fav'd this one my friend...Peace Dave...Estefano...
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 replied Unknown
Yet again thanks for ur review. I've not listened to this track in a long time, i wouldn't mind going back and polishing it up now i know i little more about producing but unfotunally i dont have reason no more.
TraXnCtrl
TraXnCtrl 27th Jan 2010 21:49 - 14 years ago
great effort for a first track....liked the guitar sounds and the melodies....keep at it
Trax
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 replied Unknown
cheers for the review. I always ment to go back to that track and finish it. I don't think any song i do is ever complete. And it's been just over a year and a half for this track. You should check out my new song called fat salad under electro. (i'm still wrking on it at the mo, tho and will probally update it soon.
codymeiser
codymeiser 9th Oct 2009 22:07 - 15 years ago
I like this song. The guitar kinda remids me of a Sheryl Crow song. The intro has to be my favorite. I love all the elements that were used. Good job.
KelleyKrueger
KelleyKrueger 6th Mar 2009 02:56 - 15 years ago
Dig the alternative sounding guitar diddy !!! Goez real nice with the syncopated drumkit rhythm !!! Lik'd how "U" introduced different instruments/effxxx into the mix az "U" went along !!! The mix iz a little dry n' "U" might try adding some BaZZ !!! Really creative work !!! Kelley K
Sixfingermusic
Sixfingermusic 25th May 2008 11:45 - 16 years ago
Forgive me for the Matrix reference, I am at least 40% Sci-Fi/Fantasy Geek at heart. You have some interesting sounds happening here. A couple thoughts (and please consider that this is only my very subjective opinion.) This track would benefit from a little more varied instrumentation. You have good melodies working, they could use a little extra variety. Also you might consider editing down to the strongest stuff, maybe cut 90 seconds or so to make it really tight. Very good for a first shot. Keep it going and always keep the love in what you do. Peace, Six
Soulfull
Soulfull 25th May 2008 11:32 - 16 years ago
I love it mate, very good tune you've made. Very unuual, VERY trippy!! For a first track it as lots potential. Keep up the good work man.
Cheers S.
Ps: I dowloaded it.

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