You got a good flow and your voice is cool. but those rhymes are nothing new. Sit down and really write some fire and you can make it. Listen to guys like Jada, Black Thought, Talib..real wordsmiths and write something that's groundbreaking, ya feel. I think you can pull it off, but it takes work. One.
Thank for the feed back. Keep in mind one thing. I don't write. I'm a freestyler. I do agree there is alot of room for improvement but it will always be. Seriously though thank you for your honesty. I feel like a lot of people don't want to give the negative, but thats why we are all hear. Me personally I'm always trying to improve. Peace
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