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Nice voice

what up homie, like it. I will do a track and send it to you.

holla

What up homie, just here to give my opinion and advice, not hatin. I have been doing music for a while now and have recorded a few rap artist, so I am not just talking out of my neck. I like the concept, but to me you need to put more flavor in it. It sounds like you are reading it from a paper. Lots of artist read from a paper when they are recording but the trick is not to make it sound that way. I would love to make a beat for the lyrics, but I wish that you had put more feeling in the hook. A rapper has to make his audience believe what he is saying no matter what it is, and that is done through your delivery.

I hope I did not offend you in any way just trying to give my advice to make you as hot as you wanna be.

holla

very nice, if you have some completed songs of you singing pella, I would love to do the music.

Finally someone doing real spoken word and not just reading some 30 second poem that they thought of while sitting on the toilet. Thank you, Thank you.

I like the tone in your voice

I like this. I hear a good song in there.

I like the tone in your voice, very nice.