BrokenScythe

Grind n grind

Los Angeles, United States

Joined : 29th Jul 2010 - 14 years ago

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BrokenScythe comments on acapellas

BrokenScythe has posted 11 comments on other peoples acapellas.

Comments (11)

BrokenScythe 1st Feb 2012 00:18 - 12 years ago

on Chill Nights Acapella by ChaseManhattan

Hey Chase, it's Scythe again man. Made another track with your pella in it. Fit the track nicely IMO. Hope you dig the outcome. Let me know if you're cool with me leaving it up for free DL.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/121257

BrokenScythe 3rd Jan 2012 01:50 - 13 years ago

on Phantom Acapella by ChaseManhattan

Hey fam. I really dug this acapella. It fit a track I made just today perfectly IMO. Let me know what you think, and if you like it enough, I'll extend it to be a full song.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/119794

BrokenScythe 12th Apr 2011 02:53 - 13 years ago

on Venomous MCs ft Nepaul and Halfknot by nepaul

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/1021it64

Its short loud and simple haha

Few questions
#1: what link should i put up for HalfKnot?
#2: Are you kool with me making it downloadable?
#3: Do you want a copy? if so let me know your email.
Mine is broken.scythe@yahoo.com

nepaul replied Unknown

Dope remix man!

1. this is halfknots loop profile link. http://www.looperman.com/users/detail/226698
2. yes
3. you can just make it downloadable and I'll pull a copy from your page.

BrokenScythe 12th Apr 2011 02:22 - 13 years ago

on Venomous MCs ft Nepaul and Halfknot by nepaul

I guess this fire is too good to pass up man. I used it in a track of mine called Reckless. Ill be uploading it soon so ill drop you the link. You n Halfknot will being getting mad cred from me.
be back in a sec.

BrokenScythe 12th Apr 2011 00:16 - 13 years ago

on Throwback Accapella by SkribleJ

Not bad Skrible, I like the lyrics. Your second verse is, to me, much better than the first
Coming from a big Hip Hop fan, I think you could do a couple things to help your flow out.
-word choice- a few lines seemed a bit to simple. There was a lot of one two rhyming but not enough oblique, enjambment or double rhymes. Consider trying to mix things up a lil more you know?
-general flow- coming from someone who is also trying to learn to rap better, in general just try to feel it out a little more. Its also much better to do enough takes that you feel comfortable with spitting the lines. if you dont after a few, you probably should change a few words or switch the flow.
Just suggestions homie. Keep at it.

SkribleJ replied Unknown

HEY HEY! Good to see a veteran's gotten on my ass! Lol. So anyways, thanks for giving the suggestions! Lyrics were made a little earlier when I was still maturing! But you're right, some sentences stop short. I plan to fix and I really want to do double rhymes and stuff like that, but you know I still need to learn a few tools of the trade before I start writing real shiet! But hey man, thanks for taking the time and writing out something I could gain a little wisdom from. Wish I'd get more reviews like this in song section! Appreciate your help brotha! Peace!
-Skrib

BrokenScythe 30th Jan 2011 09:51 - 13 years ago

on Better Days Redone by Luckyfeatherstudios

So I finally got around to this pella today. I spent about the last 3 hours thinking something up for it. I think you'll dig it. Has a much more thoughtful approach to it.
Check it on my page.
Better Dayz FEAT LuckyFeather

Something about making tracks for your lyrics just intrigues the hell outta me btw.

BrokenScythe 11th Jan 2011 06:50 - 13 years ago

on Better Days Redone by Luckyfeatherstudios

I dig this pella, so ima try to work it bro. see what i can cook up on a darker tip. Good work, I dig this though, really.

Luckyfeatherstudios replied Unknown

dude i would love to hear anything you would make dude.. if i dont get back to you right away sorry.. i have been over the road. driving 18 wheelers for cr england. good munny, but i am not getting to spend much of it. but it will all go to a cool lil home studio. with a new laptop an keybord and bass. ya know.. any way. pls use this pellea and ill hit ya up as soon as i can.. i should be back in cali in 1 to 2 weeks.. looking forward to hearing your jam brah.. peace homie and thanks for the listen

BrokenScythe 25th Oct 2010 23:03 - 14 years ago

on Bound by Luckyfeatherstudios

Depth, depth and more depth. You have it bro, you really do. And your FLOW is getting better and better dude. Im actually going to see if I can make something to roll with this, see what I can do bro. Good work, great writing.

Luckyfeatherstudios replied Unknown

thanks man means alot to me brah.. if you do i would love to hear it. bro you got mad skills to.. one day we will make a legend like track haha.. i hope you can use it haha.. ill keep writeing tracks.. i hope and pray we do a song sometime soon

EDIT dude you should throw down a few lines and mix em in wiff mine and we could have a cool song bawhaha just a thought

BrokenScythe 18th Sep 2010 09:50 - 14 years ago

on Long Day by BrittanyIman

Hopefully you grab that new mic and we can try collabing. :)
Really now, you sing very beautifully, and I love that you have passion.
Just be a lil prouder momma, you have every reason to speak up, no need for whispers =)
Keep on trying !

BrittanyIman replied Unknown

Thanks for all the positive comments. I am trying to get this darn mic but funds are totally tight. For now I will try to keep writing and sing louder lol. I will collab with anyone willing to.
Brit

BrokenScythe 18th Sep 2010 07:13 - 14 years ago

on Military Zone by FarishaMusic

my girlfriend and I are fans haha.
I may use this, if I do I will no doubt let you know Farisha!

BrokenScythe 1st Aug 2010 10:42 - 14 years ago

on THE CAUSE - NOBODY ACCAPELLA by djrelicnj

personal use only, no sales, no nothing. I'll acknowledge and give credit where its due. I just wanted to use this sick recording on a track I made to give it more appeal for feed.
Plus I sometimes need something to see if my tracks are actually usable.
(a lot of what i make is at 90 bpm..its my sweet spot)
Im only learning so Id appreciate it if I could.

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