WELL HELLO this is incredibly sensual, without being degrading, which I love. I honestly don't know why you feel this is cheesy according to your soundcloud- this is exactly what my husband would say to or think about me...why are normal feelings considered cheesy if expressed out loud? To a woman, hearing this in words is HOT; even hotter is the physical anticipation these lyrics create. You handle this well- bravo! I'm certainly inspired in a couple different ways.
Thank you ma'am... My main issue with the track really was the hook... I don't tend to do hooks on tracks, and this one just felt funny :D I sent it to my wife and she liked it so that is always positive.
Thank you for the compliment. I have been working hard on executing different styles to practice on as I work on my improvement. Right now im trying to learn how to mix and later master my work Cubase 5 so I can soon start putting some original work up.
I will be doing another one in a couple of days in case you might want to hear more.
Fair enough, though I want to constructively admit I wished these lyrics had more creativity and originality. I really like the tone of your voice and personally feel you could come up with something "better"...but better might just be a matter of what style I prefer. Obviously many people downloaded this and have found it useful so do yo thang.
Wonder what this sounds like raw, without all the effects. Your effects are cool within your song, but I might like to take this in another direction in my version which is very hard to do when it is already laden with effects.
I can post it later if you want. I don't even know what it sounds like. I recorded it with the effects which also changes the way I inflect. Now I am wondering what it sounds like.
I meant that I have a dry one in SC, this one obviously is not :) I've noticed that the wet ones often come more handy to producers who are looking for ready-to-go-vocals. And if someone prefers to do the work themselves, they often appreciate wav-files over mp3 anyway and since that is not possible here due to size restrictions, I put the wet one here.
Yeah Jon!! I got super excited upon seeing this!! I like the effects on it. I personally have more use for effected lyrics than not because I'm not good at that on other people's vocals, but I like to upload dry for those good at mixing them. I don't feel led to download this particular one, but keep em coming! Hey can I send you some lyrics (just one idea) to sing and upload on here?
I'd love to hear you upload more stuff, maybe with fewer effects and more original lyrics. Challenge yourself to rhyme with double or triple syllables, and in a different form other than at the end of every other sentence. Maybe try rhyming every mid sentence and every end sentence. Or every third sentence, with an extended emphasis on the rhyming word.
I enjoyed this style, has an indie feel. Your vocals are quite nice.
Thank you for your comment JJ Weekz.
I know exactly what you mean.
I write in with a lot styles and for this one, it's almost poetry right ;)
It's a story where I didn't found it important to rhyme the first and the third or the second and fourth words.
However, my next upload will be more your style!
No probably a bit out of context here, working on a few experimental things at the moment. Thanks for your feedback,I
enjoyed your recent acapellas by the way.
I would have loved to have used this, but there's too many gosh darn effects to leave room for my own creativity. The last squeal is perfect except for the effect clipping sound.
Thanks a million! I love it when someone loves my voice! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Hopefully I will be posting something soon. Thanks for cheering for me. :o)
I should be able to arrange that :) You can hit me up directly via mail. (I dunno if I can link it here, but you can find my contact info from my profile)
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I will be doing another one in a couple of days in case you might want to hear more.
Thanks Again,
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And yeah, I'll def keep it up. Thanks for listening
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I enjoyed this style, has an indie feel. Your vocals are quite nice.
I know exactly what you mean.
I write in with a lot styles and for this one, it's almost poetry right ;)
It's a story where I didn't found it important to rhyme the first and the third or the second and fourth words.
However, my next upload will be more your style!
Did you managed to compose something with this?
Thanks again!
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enjoyed your recent acapellas by the way.
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