The beat is good nice bright drum hats snare is good, but pay attention for the bass. You need to change the delay time of your bass to make it fitting and not sounding overlaying over each other u know what I mean?
Happy birthday at first :D hope you've had a nice celebration.
Here's my version of tryin to create a nonclippin bass ^^
overlayin it makes it hard but anyways u can listen to it here: http://www.peerless-records.com/happybirthday.mp3
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Here's my version of tryin to create a nonclippin bass ^^
overlayin it makes it hard but anyways u can listen to it here: http://www.peerless-records.com/happybirthday.mp3
have a nice evening yet,
kind regards,
Nekros ;)