Peeped it. The drums are quite sloopy, meaning they are sometimes of beat. But maybe that's the point ? Also the wobble in the beginning set me quite off. The dialogue is nice but there's no need to stop the audio completely each time someone speaks. But all of it is rather opinion then hard truth. Keep doing what you love
on Lofi piano chords by Mingu5
https://soundcloud.com/djagali-gorogo-rawson/we-all-die