Nah man I definitely like it! Especially for a 10 minute beat you did great!
the bass is in key and sounds good with the melody
only thing a little off for me was the switch in the middle but then again if you get a rapper on it I feel like they could still make it work and have a cool adlib or quote there and then switch back to the rapping to create a cool effect to the track
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the bass is in key and sounds good with the melody
only thing a little off for me was the switch in the middle but then again if you get a rapper on it I feel like they could still make it work and have a cool adlib or quote there and then switch back to the rapping to create a cool effect to the track