I'll echo what my friend here already said. I think you're on your way up, and music has no ceiling. U can be as great as u want to be, if u put in the work. And that's exactly what this is, putting in the work. Keep at it, man. I'll check out whatever u post and follow how u progress. For now tho, focus on the consistency of ur bars, and you'll grow from good to great. See u round. -Aaron
Hello, a very nice guitar intro! You also did a very good job of selecting the other instruments used. You also recited the text very sensitively. The whole thing stands on a stable foundation of bass and drums. Very nice song!
That micro-bubble at 0:10, was that intentional?
Kind regards, Manuela
Everything is great, but I agree with Dime about the sudden stop, if I was me, I would use a subtle disc stop effect or something or the sort for the sudden stop, but also add maybe hits of the same effect or similar sounds throughout the track. Doesn't have to be a disc effect, but you get what I mean. For this the sudden stop I think is a negative without something to back it up.
nice work lads, good vocals nice pace and flow great guitar and the melody and beat are on point, you put work into it, you should revisit the finish though, the mix and mastering are good i dont mind straight stops but that was to abrupt, a lazy finish thats the last thing you here it needs to be as good as the intro
the lyrics are cool man, you and your friend both killed it. try and stay consistent with it and you'll be srt8. If you ever want free features hit my email, I make the same stuff. Also, www.goodhertz.com has a 30 day free trial on all their plugins, it will help the mixing process a lot.
Very nice soulful melodic rap. I like it very much! The ending is very abrupt. I think that's too blatant for this very melodic track. Otherwise, good mixing and mastering, very balanced.
Kind regards, Manuela
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thanks for the feedback brother appreciate it
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