AoKay

First track???

Congratulations...super melodies in the music, the acapella is awesome, too...my only remark is that there is no peak of the song...a bombastic chorus, you know...the acapella is limited I know, but somehow with the synths p.e. ...

Great work, Danke

Good start AoKay!:)

All the best___Orlando

laudable usage of that acapella .nice composition & instrumental design which quite fits for pella & wonderfullY fine for firsT done track . respects___Behnam

I really like, great work!

This is your first !? It's nice work!
I think, very nice attempt at progressive house.

Let's keep doing our best!

Takeshi

Well done, really nice track and the vocals have fitted really well. There are some sound issues that need to be addressed but some simple mastering would sort this. The synth between 1.04 and 1.20 needed just a bit more tempo I thought, and for about the last 40 secs the beat became a bit out of sync with the rest. These are just my honest opinions and are minor issues. It is still a great effort and you should be proud of it.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!

Nicely done, but I suggest you turn the master down a bit and the kick up to create a little more of low end hard bass. The master so it doesn't overpowers too much haha
Another way of making your kick come through more clear is editing the synth so the low end on 200 hz and below gets cut out, this will leave room for the kick more. But that's just a hint ;)

Further I like the song it's really good and you managed to fit the vocals really well ;)

Greetings john

Good work with the pella on this one! Works great!