Musically you are on the right lines and the structure is sound, though I feel there is something missing to give it that extra edge. The vocals are great, but I don't think they sit totally right with this piece. that said a pretty good effort.
Drawn in right away by this chill musical vibe, I actually like the musical composition much better than the vocals and feel this particular piece needs custom made lyrics (though I am unable to offer at the time). Enjoyed the listen!
Thanks so much for your words, i'm glad to share my first upload with you on looperman ! this one is full of sub-bass so i hope you have listened to it with a subwoofer, it makes sens and balance with harmony and chords but anyway i have to get more bass on little speakers and improve my mastering's skills... Love your voice ! keep in touch JJ !
on KumfortZone feat JJWeekz - Time to give it up by KumfortZone
on KumfortZone feat JJWeekz - Time to give it up by KumfortZone
Musically you are on the right lines and the structure is sound, though I feel there is something missing to give it that extra edge. The vocals are great, but I don't think they sit totally right with this piece. that said a pretty good effort.
Best wishes,
Mark/Larry!
on KumfortZone feat JJWeekz - Time to give it up by KumfortZone