Very cool vibe here. I like the vocal sample but agree with Valve that it needs some tweaking if you want to keep it prominent in the mix. Could put simple lfo on it and knob-ride automation or some ping pong pitch delays if you are low on knobs. :D Sounds like perfect gaming music to me. It would calm me down when i realized the key needed for the end of level door is the same one dropped two worlds ago to make room for more arrows.
Thanks a lot. Of all the instruments out there, I find the acoustic guitar to be one of the most emotive instruments, but maybe that's just because I personally played the guitar in the past!
Yeah, MINOR2GO has some real quality loops -- I'm really glad I found this guitar loop.
Dreams move laterally and have transfinite perimeters. Which means they're all over the place and seemingly infinite in size.
Keeping that in mind, the little vocal thing you have going through this is on a linear track. It doesn't move anywhere but front to back. Try some panning and volume automation. Maybe a little delay. Give it freedom to roam. Same with the gated chorus. It's effective, but some creative panning would really bring it to life. The only other suggestion I have is maybe add a little more variation to the drums. Maybe some hats and a couple rides to help fill in some of the spaces.
The use of Allan Watts was an excellent choice. You just can't go wrong with that. The whole atmosphere of the track is a good one and I can see, or hear, rather, how it's a dreamy one. I really like the concept and, honestly, it's good as it is, I just think it could be better with some super easy adjustments.
Thanks for the comment. In the past, I've made the mistake of making too many layers in my tracks, so I tried to keep this track as minimalistic as I could.
To be honest, the drums also bugged me a bit, as I knew something new could be thrown in there. I went wild with reverb in this track though, but I couldn't find much place for delay. As for panning, thats really something I need to add to my tracks (unfortunately, I only have one operational speaker at the moment and I cant find my headphones :( , so I kind of just abandoned panning on this track, as I cant hear it).
But I agree with everything you said. I'll definitely have to make some minor adjustments.
Amazing work! Top quality, great use of vocals and guitar samples. All in all just an amazing yet relaxing track to listen to. Very laid back and catchy. Thanks for the listen and hope to hear more like this in the future!
Thanks for the kind words. I plan to make more like this in the future, but for now I'm trying to experiment with a wide variety of genres. I'll be sure to get back to this style though!
How the hell did you make this ship like waveform?
This is a simple artwork on it's own...:-)
I'm so happy cause this brilliance is very far from dnb...this is much more than only tuctuctuctuc...you know, kick after kick...unbelevable music you have in your hand, heart and soul...I'm a fan...
Glad you liked it. This originally started as 3 different compositions, but my gut told me to find a way to unite them. I'm glad you thought I pulled it off.
on Finding You - Version 2 by steve010101
Love that funny vocals, and relaxing atmosphere through the whole song!
Thanks for the comment.
Kind regards,
-Steve
on Finding You - Version 2 by steve010101
Any, i quite enjoyed. Some good suggestions here. But IMO, if you tweek, keep the minimal feel to it. More is not always better.
Good work.
RW
Kind regards,
-Steve
on Finding You - Version 2 by steve010101
Thanks for the suggestions and tips.
Kind regards,
-Steve
on Come Home by steve010101
Yeah, MINOR2GO has some real quality loops -- I'm really glad I found this guitar loop.
Anyway, thanks a bunch for the feedback!
on Finding You - Version 2 by steve010101
on Finding You - Version 2 by steve010101
Dreams move laterally and have transfinite perimeters. Which means they're all over the place and seemingly infinite in size.
Keeping that in mind, the little vocal thing you have going through this is on a linear track. It doesn't move anywhere but front to back. Try some panning and volume automation. Maybe a little delay. Give it freedom to roam. Same with the gated chorus. It's effective, but some creative panning would really bring it to life. The only other suggestion I have is maybe add a little more variation to the drums. Maybe some hats and a couple rides to help fill in some of the spaces.
The use of Allan Watts was an excellent choice. You just can't go wrong with that. The whole atmosphere of the track is a good one and I can see, or hear, rather, how it's a dreamy one. I really like the concept and, honestly, it's good as it is, I just think it could be better with some super easy adjustments.
Take care.
V.
To be honest, the drums also bugged me a bit, as I knew something new could be thrown in there. I went wild with reverb in this track though, but I couldn't find much place for delay. As for panning, thats really something I need to add to my tracks (unfortunately, I only have one operational speaker at the moment and I cant find my headphones :( , so I kind of just abandoned panning on this track, as I cant hear it).
But I agree with everything you said. I'll definitely have to make some minor adjustments.
Thanks for the feedback!
on Come Home by steve010101
It will be non profit, and the film will be used solely as a university assignment. Would it be ok for me to use it?
thanks,
- giles
on Come Home by steve010101
on Come Home by steve010101
This is a simple artwork on it's own...:-)
I'm so happy cause this brilliance is very far from dnb...this is much more than only tuctuctuctuc...you know, kick after kick...unbelevable music you have in your hand, heart and soul...I'm a fan...
10/10
Danke
The guitar-loop had to take centre stage on this track, so I tried to keep it as simple as possible. Glad you liked it.
If you're wondering, the vocals are by Alan Watts (look him up on Youtube).
Thanks for the comment.
on Frogs and Helicopters by steve010101
The greatest hallucinative but progressive, surrealistic and avantgarde artwork I've ever heard here...
SIMPLY AMAZING!!!
Fav, dl, Hats off
Danke
Thanks for the kind words.