kriebel17

Great voice, my friend, and well applied to this heartfelt piece. Ubfortuanely, far too many of us know deeply the feelings your words and voice are expressing.

The track is great. Faved

John

Great tune, my friend, despite its dark nature.

Great vocals

John

I like the track. Its great as is, but with bass and druums, a bit of production, this baby would kick.

Faved

John

Great track. Love the sound of your guitar and I think your vocals are great.

Faved

John

Nice job man, I like what you did with my guitar loop, good voice, a nice rock sound to it. Keep it up man.

Yeah, I'd love to have you on one of my tracks; anyone my voice isn't already on: just pick one! There's only one problem I don't know if I've got anything your style. Maybe you could try New Generation: even though it says it's rap it could also sort of be Rock.
Anyway even if you don't want to, good luck all the same.

Like this dude.
I dunno if it was it was intentional but your voice distorted in some places but besides that I really liked how it is so raw. No effects. Was the guitar played live or recorded live? Great guitar anyway. You have a great voice and you have the rock sort of sound to your singing voice which I like a lot, if you know what I'm saying. Anyway very emotional.
Keep up the great songs man!

Dude, you spoke to me. I like the song alot. Can me and the guys do a version of your tune with your blessing? I like it.
Keep it rockin!
T

Nice this one really call me my attention i love the guitar you have charming voice maybe with some drums and another instrument
will sound greater.
good work

all the best

silvestre

dude i know i did this song already, but i have it on my phone and i been jamming it for a few days and i feel that i need to tell ya something man. your voice mixed with those autotunes for some reason remind me of tool. it is soothing and new man. dude you may not like tool. not many people do, but i love em. one of my fav all time bands. so in my bok this huge

Love the guitars, the lyrics are telling its own story.

Yep i know that story too well, you sing it right dude!! this track could be made better with a bit of drums.

But hey, it's good.

Peace...

i actually really enjoyed this track, it's really relatable, and thats very important. the vocals are very powerful, but they're not really focused. now i dont consider myself the best singer, but i do know that if you were to take a little time and practice the pitches with an instrument, piano would be best if you have one or something similar. just to give them a real sturdy ground.

i also enjoyed the accoustic guitar. i thought it went well together with the lyrics and the vocals. it has a nice melody to it. my biggest thing here though, is that the Song doesn't take off. and if this is just your rough version i have no doupt that you can make something truely fantastic out of it.

now this is just me and you dont have to do this but i think it could pick the song of the ground.

introduce it the same way, but then make a small break, and bring in the drums on a crash, and a sustained guitar in the back ground coming in with the crash.
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then bring it back down a tid bit with your original guitar line, but with drums behind it that follow it and continue your song.
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i have many more idea's but i dont want to waste too much of your time. i saw the protential of this and i just couldn't resist
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However as is, this is a very protential track, the idea of it is perfect and the guitar is flawless. the lyrics cut pretty deep and your voice is very powerfull. Now i understand this is Your scene here, but in the case you wanted any help on this id be more than willing for a collaboration. and even help you out on the background vox, if your interested let me know, if you have any questions or concerns, contact me.

- Much respect Fayz

love it it is diffrent but hay you bring your own style good track
kerry :)

i like the song but it needs a beat but other than that its a good song
kerry :)

Sounds like this needs to be some sort of screamo rock tune.

I don't know if you feeling pain or about to burst out in joy.

maybe you need a lead man to do this and bring IT!!

hahaha you bring s a new style. to rock. autotunes is rarely used in rock. and if done with a good voice like yours it sounds pretty awesome. nice job brah. there is not one thing i would change about this song.. simply perfect 10/10 .. great work man

dude. haha i swear we have had to have the same ex. lol i feel that way lol. your voice was pretty good... what i think you should do is sing it aging softly.. and add it in as back ground vocals. other than that bra. this track was among perfection. deepness from the heart. simply art 10 out of 10 man

Lyndon Jones used this backing track no? it's good.

nice picking pattern on this, keep it up

Dark stuff man, I dig it! I can totally understand this song being about work, I think most artists have troubles like this when it comes to work. Very cool music and vocals. Very well done!

Good track..I am not much for the autotune on the vocal and it does not seem like you need to use it. Coll feel to the track and I like the lyric.

Peace,

Sob Story

get rid of the autotune, other than that very cool. Sounds like Greg Diaz acoustic loops?

Wow straight from the heart. Strong sentiments. Not sure you needed the autotune. You definatley need the MCAC tag!

The autotune effect usually makes me want to stab out the eyes of children, but I really enjoyed it on this track. The guitar is smooth and minimalist and the vox are powerful. The only issue I had was that it ended really abruptly which was a bit jarring to me. But maybe that's the feeling you were trying elicit.