Macealicious

I'm gonna keep it honest with you, the hook is straight fire bro! But the verses are terrible, and it really ruins the song. Was this freestyled or an unfinished version? You need someone else to body the verses, then this song would be an absolute banger! Hope you don't take this as hating, I don't want to be rude or anything, I just hate to see a song's potential wasted. Best of luck in the future bro!

Keep trying ,you will get there someday.But this aint hip hop.More like just pop.

i see something behind this crazy beautiful song
maybe i see what you dont see like i do (a sentence from eminem in i need a doctor music :D)

but seriously, record the vocal without anything and any effects, and give me your vocal + your project
and mail it for me (persianicarus@yahoo.com)

and wait for a few days and see what i can do with it to explode looperman.

regards...

nicwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Hello
I’ll second Silverman’s comment You do have boyband kind of voice very good
Jamid

Seriously not my kind of thing but with practice you have that boy band voice for sure and I'm sure all the young girls would be swooning soon enough.
If that's your little brother in the background give him a slap.