Fire, I like the instrumental selection and the way your cadence and flow match it. Only thing I would say is, well idk if you changed the pitch but if you did be sure to turn on preserve formants, because right now there is a robotic sound to your voice. If that doesn't work I would say go into an equalizer and bring up those mids, to try and keep the natural sound. But ay its still fire.
Theres just a little pitch correction but I think the robotic effect might be from the microphone being a bit busted lol... but thanks for the feedback!!
This shit slap. People say you sound young but you just sound like X bruh because X got a big ass vocal range. You got a nice ass voice bruh the flow on point
The vocals sound a bit unclear I think. Or at least I don't know a better way to say that. Maybe postprocessing them by just a bit will help.
Also a subtle synth may do the beat very well (maybe doubling the trumpets or whatever it is and also play through the note even when the trumpets are not playing or so).
But it's a pretty cool track you got there :)
Hey good idea you have here i love the energy you put into this track but the one problem i find with this song is the bass is overpowering the song and you cant hear the drop lead properly.
So what i recommend is you turn the bass down half way so you can hear the lead more clear and trust me after you turn the bass down you'll notice the song will sound more crispy.
The music was good, the lyrics were awful and over done by every other "rap" artist already. Just look in the news, most people are getting sick of people being disrespectful and the general downward direction this world is heading. Your words are only adding to the negativity that is over taking everything. Honestly, the lyrics are childish and don't paint a very good portrait of your self. If you are serious about making music and trying to make a name for yourself try coming up with lyrics that don't have so much swearing and negativity towards people. Think of it this way, is this a song you would want your Mom, Sister, Grandmother to hear, I would hope not. I think you have a lot of potential if you apply it in a better way. Anyway, this is not original and relies on shock value, which has no value these days. Not trying to be a jerk....just honest like you asked.
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Also a subtle synth may do the beat very well (maybe doubling the trumpets or whatever it is and also play through the note even when the trumpets are not playing or so).
But it's a pretty cool track you got there :)
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So what i recommend is you turn the bass down half way so you can hear the lead more clear and trust me after you turn the bass down you'll notice the song will sound more crispy.
Cheers
Keep Up The Great Work.
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We should work in the future - peace
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check my music out fam, message me on Soundcloud if you like to collab
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Where did you get the beat from?
Here
Thanks btw
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but this slaps tbh... reminds me of Young Ebola - Very Rare ft. xxxtentacion
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