KingVortex

I agree with SlotheProdigee. Don't cut the bass. The track has a great vibe going on and it's a shame to let it drop out. Other than that, it's brilliantly oppressive and sinister. Very nice work.

TA

This is much more than hip hop (for me).

It's a brilliant artwork man!

Hats off, handshake, Danke

I like this. Only thing i would suggest is no to stop the bass to have the voice sound effect go off. Throws off the rhythm to the song.

I'd love to mess around and write to this if you want to shoot that my way

I like your use of sound effects throughout the track. Great work on this. You're improving quickly.

ER

It's a mash-up type of sound. There's a slight skipping sound at the 2:47 mark - i'm not sure if that was the flaw but I didn't detect any others.

nice track love the game sound effects, also that synth at 1min is badass.

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wow, based on the opening choir and cool chord progression the rest of the song was like a harsh slap in the face, (not in a bad way)(and not in a 50 shades of grey way), but just like a jolt into something very different. I enjoyed this one.

at 00:25 you got some nice drum.

Great pads in this one, they balance the tribal feel of the drums. There is plenty of room left on this one to add a bunch of instruments and vocals if you are so inclined. Well done. I hope all is well.

Bear

I love it! Reminds me of early Daft Punk.

Maybe a few more elements are needed (especially in the beginning) but that can be fixed.

Keep it up, Faved!

-R.P.S

Loved the intro, as modex said, the timing is a bit of an issue. Tighten that up and this is a killer song.
Cru

I like the intro. As said before there does seem to be some timing issues and some fx is needed. This song isn't bad. It just needs a little work. Work on adding crashes and timing it better. I also think you should fade the volume at the end or put a crash with an automation clip on the volume right after the last sound. Work on those things and this could be a nice track. Good work.

I love the way that intro vocal "vortex" sounds. So huge. Personally, I feel that there should have been like a splash or something to fill that little empty space at the very beginning in the big build. As the song goes on, it falls out of time. I think fixing this issue will really tighten it up. Good sounds, what kind of synth/keyboard/VST are you using? Definitely a unique song haha. Cheers!

Downloaded it I got some ideas, got a nice feeling going on too. Not sure how to repost it back in your Name?

Empty streets late night, alone...in a hurry to go nowhere...it could be chill out...:-)

Fantastic piece of atmospherical, moody ambience...

Respect, Danke