conor8

this is absolutely amazing you should be very proud of yourself, im into mixing orchestral with hip hop and would of loved to of done a hip hop version of this in my own style its amazing i love it more of these please:)

Nice and quiet dark sound man! Good going but...Where's the rest of the track?

you have some clipping when that kick lands, otherwise its good, is this recorded? sounds like it, perhaps quantize it, (thats Alt - q in the piano roll.) anyways still neat.

Alright mate, few things.

You need to quantize the drums in this. If you don't know how to do that or what that is I mean you need to straighten them up. Get them running in time. But then it's always good to push a few of your drum notes a touch out of time to give your drums a bit of feeling. But you only want to do that to percussion in general, the odd snare maybe but keep your kicks constant. Also the synth line and notes aren't grimey enough yet, I'd go back and chance the notes and not have it coming in all the time.

You need to think about structure more, make a 8 bar into a 8 bar chorus and then a 16 bar verse for example.

Also think about what's doing what in the song, as in.... You need to really think about what notes are doing what to make the movement in the song. What won't do is just throwing more ideas and notes over the top to compensate for a half arsed beat. Go back and listen to your fav grime choons and think about what makes them move the way they do.

Most of all mate you need more time. I can tell you've just started off producing, it's just a question of time, patience, thinking and practicing.

Good luck mate, and keep going.

pretty good track!! i liked the melodies and the whole groove was really cool!!! Could use more melody in there tho...thats the only thing i thought was missing! Great tune tho...very dance-able!!

Hi Conor8
I like this track its well arranged the sounds you have used go well together.
Just one thing the keyboard sounds especially at the beginning of the track sounds a bit weak like they need some sort of effect on them. But I have just set up a new subwoofer and i have not got it tuned quite right with my monitors yet so that will not be helping.
But this is a cool track and I enjoyed listening to it.
Well Done
Krook

Cool groove but it's a bit short and it ends abrubtly. Keep it up though.

i would say the same like harmo maybe you could add a short reverb (maybe one where you can set the panning. f.ex. panning from left to right)to the guitar. in my headphones i've got the feeling that you've done it that way therfor a bit unfit. but all and all it's a good compilation!

greetz isaak

The arp at the beginning is really cool, but sounds real 80's-ish. There is no real prominent kick with some "umph" you just have a subbass kick. Then there is no ending. I think you can keep the arp but change the sound, then make other changed like the kick and create an ending and it will be great.

-DaMann

yo man
i love ur track neep it coming man
lets here more like this

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