To make the first 15 seconds less annoying? It would probably help if one or both of the instruments was doing something a little more complex in terms of the beats or notes. Or perhaps if there was a third instrument right at the start. In my opinion, those two instruments just don't go together all that well (when its just the two of them). Maybe its because they are so far apart pitch-wise.
(Boy, am I ever picky! Remove an instrument here, add an instrument there! ;) )
welcome to the Lop turtleman...I think you will find some good musical company here...and you are off to a fine start....nice job on this one...enjoyed the listen...Ed
on Experimental rap instrumental by turtleman5505
(Boy, am I ever picky! Remove an instrument here, add an instrument there! ;) )
on Experimental rap instrumental by turtleman5505
-up to 0:15 - annoying
-~0:16 to 1:54 - sounds not too bad, but in my opinion, there are one or two too many instruments playing during this part of the song.
-1:55 to 2:15 - pure gold! (Well, maybe that's a slight exaggeration, but I really like it.)
-2:24 to end of track - still sounds good, but in my opinion this section is also suffering from a few too many instruments
on I challenge you rappers or singers to use dis beat by turtleman5505
on Lonely Spaceman by turtleman5505
-Brad