That older Flux Pavilion vibe is strong XD! Maybe if you were to layer the drop with a lead it could add a bit more character, and a more personal touch. Just a thought, it sounds dope as it is! And make sure that those lyrics sync up right, I actually made a song a LONG time ago with these same lyrics (not advertising, I hate this track now, just showing you how I used them differently).
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FX4DNDpr0_A
Comment it's you and possibly sub :o Xd :D
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^*^ good job making this
on WMA-x-DMR-Lightz-Are-you-Listening by LIGHTZ
the bass synth is a little overpowering and might need to be mixed in a bit more imo.
some more tightening up and its dope!
on DMR-Lightz and WMA - Things That I Would Change by LIGHTZ
https://soundcloud.com/pugetsoundproductions/corruption-nothing-makes-sense