Surgimiento

For your first song, this isn't bad at all. Though I'm not a fan of the arp(?) at the beginning. It sounds decent enough. Good stuff.

So you just made your first song... either your criticism of my song was to build up your ego or to bump your track in the featured list. I don't care which reason, but you should have some sort of experience or history to be giving advise the way you did. I've recorded at least 200 songs, as well as mixing and mastering for many different musicians, and you've done a song... maybe you should practice being humble while you practice making music. I could give you exactly the same response that you left on my song about this song, but I won't even get into it. It's not worth any more time.

great