Yooooo Siiiiiick!!!!!! great hip-hop, im lovin man!!!! I'd love to hear more of this genre from you!!!! Way to kill it man you really did it!!!!! the guit is AMAZING, this beat is serious, no joke...
@SpitShine, Thank you very much for you kind words homie. I wish this track was complete. However, I am waiting on a little better vocal track to be sent to me and I will add a little more guitar work as well.
I will make sure to hit you up when it is done.
Again, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!
No bass whatsoever. The lows your hearing are the 2 organ tracks. I am waitng on a gtr track from a friend right now then I will mix it better for the master.
Thank you for listening and more importantly, commenting on my track.
good mix.. however... maybe you can turn it up a notch... put sumthang hard in it... but other than that... i know you put some time into this shit... so keep them commin....
I'm thinkin that this has more of an Electro or Techno vibe to it. I think it's because of the Guitar-like synths ya got goin on.
Let's see, advice side, I'm thinkin maybe you could punch up the bass levels here and there throughout the track to give it some Pepper. Don't be afraid to throw in a drum-fill break or two either. I agree with everyone the intro FX were outstanding and if ya did kind of add a halfway transition lull in this song it'd be awesome if ya reintroduced the alarm soundin one for that. Hmm, what else? Perhaps a secondary layer of synths (pads or leads). Lemme think about that for a sec... Ok, pads! Some light and floaty strings would add some trance flair to this. Have each key play off of the signature note of each loop. So loop 1 it'd all be in key C and loop two it'd all be in A or something like that. Anyways, I really dug what you've shared with us so far. This track has so much potential for growth. Later on!
It's funny, but as I'm listening to this it reminds me of the current project we've got going on in my Media Writing class (aka scripting). It's basically about making a PSA about something like Seat belt usage. When the teach was giving us a lesson on it we went over this one for domestic abuse and the storm FX mixed with some of his lyrics are kinda similar to the ad we went over. The mood of this is very melancholy and dramatic. Sorta like this is a life-lessons type of song. Eh (shrugs), kinda like the hip-hop version of Pearl Jam's Jeremy. Lates!
I feel the vibe in this track.. I liked it.. but would you take an advice from me? umm.. just fade out the rain loop.. love the track, and hey! thanks for listening to my tracks man :)
i like this track well but its a bit repetitive, but still that i like your drumline and the effect you put on this one, look like you know how to put Fx at the right place
@scobra: before saying that is sound is bad start first by posting yours xP
I dig the feel of the track but it sounds like it continues to build but never gets to that point. Also maybe add a few more beats to bring in the build and maybe carry the track through along with a break towards the middle of the track. Overall a good track. Keep up the great work. God Bless.
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Sorry about not being able to do interview....
Great track!
-DaMann
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I hope to have the vocal track back from Prophet/Ben soon,
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I will make sure to hit you up when it is done.
Again, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!
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Thank you for listening and more importantly, commenting on my track.
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Let's see, advice side, I'm thinkin maybe you could punch up the bass levels here and there throughout the track to give it some Pepper. Don't be afraid to throw in a drum-fill break or two either. I agree with everyone the intro FX were outstanding and if ya did kind of add a halfway transition lull in this song it'd be awesome if ya reintroduced the alarm soundin one for that. Hmm, what else? Perhaps a secondary layer of synths (pads or leads). Lemme think about that for a sec... Ok, pads! Some light and floaty strings would add some trance flair to this. Have each key play off of the signature note of each loop. So loop 1 it'd all be in key C and loop two it'd all be in A or something like that. Anyways, I really dug what you've shared with us so far. This track has so much potential for growth. Later on!
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I will put his new vocal on it sometime this weekend hopefully.
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@scobra: before saying that is sound is bad start first by posting yours xP
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It is appreciated.
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Thank you very much for your review.
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Yea I am st tinkering around on this ole laptop.
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Thank you very much for your review.
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COL_GRINDER
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