Love the dreamy pads and the deep bass to go along with it. The vocals are nice as well, but I'd suggest thinking about passing them through a low pass filter [just a tiny bit] because parts of it sound a bit too sharp to my ears [or that may be because I haven't slept in two days].
Overall, you need to work on the mastering some more because there's a lot of crackling and clipping in certain places in the latter half of the song. Also I think the kick hits a bit too hard when isolated at the beginning and towards the end. Mastering issues aside, I thought this was an enjoyable listen and was very well composed in that all the elements fit together seemlessly. Keep up the good work.
I appreciate the advice and I'm going to try the Low pass filter out. Honestly I don't know much about sound processing or editing.. I just kinda make the music and I generally settle with the crackles and distortion. I also don't know much about mastering but I'm definitely going give it more attention. Thanks again. Oh and I was trying to make the kick resemble a beating heart in the end. Maybe I went a bit to heavy on the bass for it.
on Ok One Anobe by liiiliilliilil
on Ok One Anobe by liiiliilliilil
Overall, you need to work on the mastering some more because there's a lot of crackling and clipping in certain places in the latter half of the song. Also I think the kick hits a bit too hard when isolated at the beginning and towards the end. Mastering issues aside, I thought this was an enjoyable listen and was very well composed in that all the elements fit together seemlessly. Keep up the good work.
*Go get some sleep.