Try rolling of some of the low end on those vocals (go as high as you need) and don't boost so much highs as it sounds bad.
With a bit of work on the timing and the pitch of the vocals this could be pretty good. It has a nice feel and vibe (Ryan Leslie/Drake comes to mind). The instrumental is fabulous I really like it.
Thanks man..appreciate the feedback..Definetly understand what your talkin about..I figured if I got positive feedback on it..id remove the tags and record in a real studio..
Mr. Jamesjam..i want to use as few words as possible to comment...i really dig this track...smooth, lyrical content is whats missing in todays music...true creativity...nice collab..people sleeping on this one for sure
Dude I looked all thru my email..even the spam..and I didnt see anything..send it again..this time letme know your email address..so I dont delete it by mistake..I been waitin on this from u too man..get back
Hey man..checked you out..and Im definetly trynna go in on a track for you. Im James man...So how you wanna do this...im down dude..You got mad talent..nice flows..and all of your songs sounds like I would already be on them doing a hook..So throw me a track my boi! jtmay12345@yahoo.com is another way to reach me too
First off... I love your voice.
Secondly, yeah... the vocals are a little hard to hear but I think it is great. It makes the listener actually have to actively listen.
Thank you so much...so sorry its taken me so long to get back to you...but my pc has been down for a while...Yo id love to collab with you...heard ur vooice...definetly tight...lemme pick out something for us...
Wow man...i havent been able to get online..so im very late in getting this message...if its not too lae...id love you to play it...lemme know if anythings possible...
The vocals are a little hard to hear so turn them up a little and clean it up a little because it sounds a little muddy and blurred if that makes sense? You have great potential though i'm up for a collab if you want a beat making just contact me if your interested.
dude eff the hate. i ant from the projects, but the heart in this song is deep. it cuts at ya man. this track is was mad awesome. forget any one who tells you that you need to change. the beat was phat and had an old school style. got me think of too short or tupac. mixed with that soothing singing voice. the chorus was sick, it may not of head alot of variety, but it blended so well with the music. dude that was straight maddness man. 10/10 for get the haters man
Thank you so much for the feedback...The words and the meaning for this song..really came from my everyday life..and what i was feeling..Thank you so much for listening..
Thanks for posting your opinion...much appreciated...but to tell you the truth the message of the song is just "around it goes" meaning that I felt like i was livin life in the same circle...nothing ever changing...and that message is not just about the projects...cuz i dont live in the projects..never have..the message can be applied to any area of life...whther ur rich or poor..u can still be living life in the same circle...a circle which may be hard to get out of...
Soon as I saw the title thought you'd have some soul man. Great vocal, great piano. Would love to to a remix/refix of this fam.
.... synth just came in, nice touch. If you're up for a collabo man would love to put this vocal on something and maybe use a little of the piano too and make a track around it. Let me know man cus I could turn this track into something huge. It's already sick, but I got a vision for this track man. Inspiring stuff.
i am always up o hear your ideas...I listened to some of the songs that you did...and they are nice...I am open for any suggestions that you might have... jtmay1234@yahoo.com Just let me know what you need.
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Try rolling of some of the low end on those vocals (go as high as you need) and don't boost so much highs as it sounds bad.
With a bit of work on the timing and the pitch of the vocals this could be pretty good. It has a nice feel and vibe (Ryan Leslie/Drake comes to mind). The instrumental is fabulous I really like it.
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Peace!
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Secondly, yeah... the vocals are a little hard to hear but I think it is great. It makes the listener actually have to actively listen.
I'd love to collab some time if you're with it.
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Hit me up with a email if its ok to play: djmadmuke@bilingualdesigns.com
DJ Mad Mike
PS: It sounds real good!!! Don't change anything...
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i liked the way it played out. i know it was just a sample and all. it was a real good beat. somthing to shake your head haha. great track. haha
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saying "around it goes" as much. too much repetition isn't helping here.
Another story of how someone has to overcome the projects.
How many more of these do we need to hear about.
People are struggling everywhere not just in the projects.
How about making it something more people can relate to.
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.... synth just came in, nice touch. If you're up for a collabo man would love to put this vocal on something and maybe use a little of the piano too and make a track around it. Let me know man cus I could turn this track into something huge. It's already sick, but I got a vision for this track man. Inspiring stuff.