awesome man.
this is fire
gotta be real, your topics arent too relatable with me but on a pure musical level youve improved greatly off your track i saw you put out before this
keep it up homie!!!!
-CAP
- I don't really believe that you believe in what you are delivering, that means you really gotta own it, stand behind what you are saying and making me .
I could not agree more Mafisto, that is the most honest and straight forward truth in every persons Art "believe that you own it" Well Said. :D
Hey man, I have tried rapping myself a few times and I get the feeling you are struggling with the same things as I am.
- I don't really believe that you believe in what you are delivering, that means you really gotta own it, stand behind what you are saying and making me believe that.
- Staying in tempo, this has to do with flow and counting bars, its not something many people have naturally. I would suggest just free styling to a metronome until you feel comfortable you can stay in beat.
Overall this is an attempt as you said and not something professionally finished, so keep working on it, take this feedback and keep trying soldier.
Nobody gets there without hard work and dedication.
Stay true, keep making music!
much respect to you, however i do gotta ask, are you switching languages in the verse?
some reason i have an issue understanding majority of what you said.
that being said, i would also say work on your delivery, you seem just a bit off every now and then in this song, also maybe work on your posture; as in your distance from the mic, be cautious of that, i have a lot of trouble staying in the same spot.
mixing would definitely need work, and thats coming from me - i can't mix for shit.
but yea i mean everything else you got it on lock man, its a nice track. just trying to help you out
definitely would like to hear more!
cheers to you armandas,
-CAP
nice beat bro, those 808 rolls are mad, love the additional snares too, nice energy and movement throughout the beat, one bit of advice would me to eq a bit more of the low end frequencies out of the melodies so the 808s stand out slightly better. Dope beat bro.
on Functional by Armandas1337
this is fire
gotta be real, your topics arent too relatable with me but on a pure musical level youve improved greatly off your track i saw you put out before this
keep it up homie!!!!
-CAP
on Risen by Armandas1337
I could not agree more Mafisto, that is the most honest and straight forward truth in every persons Art "believe that you own it" Well Said. :D
on Risen by Armandas1337
on Risen by Armandas1337
- I don't really believe that you believe in what you are delivering, that means you really gotta own it, stand behind what you are saying and making me believe that.
- Staying in tempo, this has to do with flow and counting bars, its not something many people have naturally. I would suggest just free styling to a metronome until you feel comfortable you can stay in beat.
Overall this is an attempt as you said and not something professionally finished, so keep working on it, take this feedback and keep trying soldier.
Nobody gets there without hard work and dedication.
Stay true, keep making music!
on Risen by Armandas1337
some reason i have an issue understanding majority of what you said.
that being said, i would also say work on your delivery, you seem just a bit off every now and then in this song, also maybe work on your posture; as in your distance from the mic, be cautious of that, i have a lot of trouble staying in the same spot.
mixing would definitely need work, and thats coming from me - i can't mix for shit.
but yea i mean everything else you got it on lock man, its a nice track. just trying to help you out
definitely would like to hear more!
cheers to you armandas,
-CAP
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