wow so i really like the intro, i freaking love string instruments especially when the come together so well. the beat is pretty strong even through my cheep laptop speakers, so there's an accomplishment right there. the beat does get a little repetitive though, and there isn't much to separate the sections from the hook to the other parts. the break down was pretty tight though, and it did add that relief of repetitive i was talking about. and you know i was wondering how you were going to end the song, and i was kind of worried about it all just stopping abruptly, but i think the fade out was very well played. this was a very beautiful track, i think my only concerns were, separation from the hook and the rest of the song, and the repetitive beat.
Thanks for the ingoing review. Thats how people learn and hopefully get better at the trade.
I know, I need to change the beat up a bit. Give it a bit more variation.
Thanks again for the review
"Before Im gone and long decayed,
And My soul leaves out it's shell,
Will I help to make a change,
Before I say Farewell?
Will I look back in disgrace,
Or be proud of myself?
Only time will tell,
So I guess for now farewell"
IM loving this mannn!!! The beat is sickkk!!!! Mind uploading the strings? or just letting me rap on the beat? I would appreciate it... The strings and bassline are epic... 5 stars homie
Hey man! THanks for the kind words.
Ehm, I can upload them but id rather have you rap on it if thats okay? Just send me a message here on the loop and ill sort you out with the mp3.
nice track,stalju!very easy and soft pop!piano melody is great, at 3:26 you put high c this is my best part! I mean everthing is good but that part is beautiful!
Yes my friend, the violins may be from here but the ones that I heard were used in your song so they are from u.All of my sounds are mainly from YAMAHA but we give these loops,sounds etc life and xpression.You coated the violins nicely.Again,Great job:)
nice flow you got there, one problem though it needs alot more kick to the drums, this is more loungy than rnb so i suggest you play around more with the drums, good luck
Hehe, funny you should mention that. Just had a conversation with 2 of my mates and they said the same thing. So I will get to it soon enough and the upload it again. Thanks for the feedback and for listening!
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Much respect, Fayz
I know, I need to change the beat up a bit. Give it a bit more variation.
Thanks again for the review
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This track can be used for game or film i dont know!!
Rocky production!
Thanks for the listen
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And My soul leaves out it's shell,
Will I help to make a change,
Before I say Farewell?
Will I look back in disgrace,
Or be proud of myself?
Only time will tell,
So I guess for now farewell"
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on Farewell by SweeneyMusic
beat
I just didnt know what to write and I was in a hurry to see someone.
Thanks again!
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Ehm, I can upload them but id rather have you rap on it if thats okay? Just send me a message here on the loop and ill sort you out with the mp3.
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u need to give him a shout nice beat
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u got me sold
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great antipication sick bass to it nice drumz
really ill track overrall fam
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Update: Didn't mean to sound cocky, but the violins are loops from here :)
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