warblud

llege tarde pero bien

I am definitely looking forward to the completed version

this track is tight man let me kno if u need some lyrics on dis bra

You have a great voice for spoken word. The lyrics are excellent and you spoke them very well. The organ was not only fitting for the text, it was perfect. I will definitely have to check out more of your work.

Great track

John

not bad not bad be nice if you changed the sample up a lil but other then that it's good

That synth or pad you used is nice. The nice soft elements added makes it relaxing to listen to. Great stuff.

this is nice and mellow with a thumping beat...nice work...maybe a horn riff or guitar riff will add the accent it may need..other than that, its a nice sounding joint

this is what spoken word is about...the truth...the content...lyric and truth fashioned into reality...peace verbalskillz

Sick bro nice beat here keep doin ur thang

glad to be the first to say u are the mann
i love this beat im hooked

this is a dope beat im impressed i wanna hear more

DEFINE GANSTA
its gansta because u made it with your skills
and posted it 4 the world 2 hear
now thats gansta 2 me

sounds good to me fam
nice intro

ur definitly getting better in your piano lesson. love the feel of the track. keep up the great work

for some reason when i hear this beat, it can see ciara killin this on the dance floor. keep up the great work

love the vibe!! hits hard too. like the piano sounds also. keep up the great work

for a rough draft this is sure a hot track!!! love the feel of it.love the sounds and how they float in and out each other. keep up the great work.

i like it good job

for a track that ur still workin out, it sounds like a winning to me. i love the slow rnb vibe it has, and i also enjoy the piano sample that comes in at the end to transition to the next phase of the track. did u do that urself or is that a loop? either way keep up the good work

I see what you're goin for. Your on your way. I like the less is more sound. smooth

Love it. Easy to add lyrics according to your theme.

not bad for a rough draft keep worken on it and i think you'll get a banger here

Potential man. Although, do you create from scratch. If not, you should..
-Peace

definitely has that middle eastern vibe to it! really cool!! I think this needs to be equalized properly for clarity. Maybe add some panning to the left or right, everything sounds pretty centered. Real cool though, has potential! Great piano playing.