This is a cool start to a track I feel like it has all the oppurtunity to become a really good track too. I think its just missing some things that would help it get to the next level.
I would push the guitar out to the sides of the track and widen it up a lot using reverb and saturation. then I would scoop some parts out of the guitar so that the synth can sit inside the guitar better.
You use ableton so something I would try is to create 2 return tracks and then put a large more stereo reverb on one and then a smaller more mono reverb on the other and then use the sends to give everything in the song a little more space to breath.
The melody also kinda goes on forever without any changes except in pitch (That can work sometimes but I think for this song you could change it up more uniquely) if its a loop you are working with then you should turn it into midi and if you wrote the midi then you should just add a couple of fills or breaks or turnarounds at the 4,8,16 bar (something to tell the listener that change is coming even if the change is it going back and starting over).
For the intro I would think about low passing the melody in slowly and adding a small background tonal or whitenoise riser this will help your track build energy more smoothly
I think the drum build needs some work as well Maybe even wait to bring the kick drum in untill the actual chorus/drop the kick drum is a massive amount of the energy in this track so bringing it in early takes away from people connecting with the melody and the guitar before the dancing really starts.
The half tempo breaks are fucking sweet I like the switch up a lot!
also You could use a lot more saturation in your mixes there very dark
This is a really good start tho just needs some more time spent on it.
Wow thank you so much for the amazing review! I did write everything except the melody which is a loop. I will put everything you said to good use! Thank you :D!
The static-y sound effect under the drums sounds great. The dissonant undertone almost sounds like another song is playing, but it works. The change at 1:17 is unexpected and appreciated. Awesome bird interlude. Great track.
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I would push the guitar out to the sides of the track and widen it up a lot using reverb and saturation. then I would scoop some parts out of the guitar so that the synth can sit inside the guitar better.
You use ableton so something I would try is to create 2 return tracks and then put a large more stereo reverb on one and then a smaller more mono reverb on the other and then use the sends to give everything in the song a little more space to breath.
The melody also kinda goes on forever without any changes except in pitch (That can work sometimes but I think for this song you could change it up more uniquely) if its a loop you are working with then you should turn it into midi and if you wrote the midi then you should just add a couple of fills or breaks or turnarounds at the 4,8,16 bar (something to tell the listener that change is coming even if the change is it going back and starting over).
For the intro I would think about low passing the melody in slowly and adding a small background tonal or whitenoise riser this will help your track build energy more smoothly
I think the drum build needs some work as well Maybe even wait to bring the kick drum in untill the actual chorus/drop the kick drum is a massive amount of the energy in this track so bringing it in early takes away from people connecting with the melody and the guitar before the dancing really starts.
The half tempo breaks are fucking sweet I like the switch up a lot!
also You could use a lot more saturation in your mixes there very dark
This is a really good start tho just needs some more time spent on it.
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congrats and handshake, Danke
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