VicUrba

Nice groove, liked the variety in the track, kept it interesting.
Great job.

Add a simple hook of lyrics - my imagination says 'Sunshine, seaside, dancetime', a male and female together ;) Kay0s

Good morning - infectious beat and great rhythymn - Really authentic dance-invoking sound. Love the vocals too. My only feeling was, it would be good to have some deeper voices on the chorus acapella parts to add another layer of contrast but seriously, I had to download it because it is darned catchy! Kay0s

Fire!!

Excellente my friend! On the money with this one, hella original! A+ all the way! Make me want to go do a reggaeton remix too now lol! Great break parts. What I dig the most is that bass synth!

This killer beat, plus some fiery Spanish rap vocals, would be pure magic!

I love the music its really cool. I wrote some lyrics to the music when I was listening.
They're nothing special
Every day my life, turns upside down
When your not here I'm feeling down
The pain in my heart, tears me apart
Please come back baby, I'm falling apart

I'm sorry for what I've done
I had no money but I had a gun
Now my life turned upside down
I can't turn back time I'm on the run

My nightmares I'm being overrun
All becuase of a stupid gun
God forgive me I'll never sin again
I woke up this morning in my home again
My wife said she loved me it was all a dream.
Heard Gods voice your promise you better keep.

I know they're really bad :P
Really loved the music nice work

Hello,

So, what Anthony said is true. The structure is good so far, but it still needs improvement. The instrumentation could be expanded, for example with a guitar. The song should be longer and the use of breaks could make it more interesting. The biggest drawback, however, is of course the lack of vocals. Finding a singer here on LM would be very difficult, as would finding suitable acapellas. I can only recommend that you first finish the song in terms of length, arrangement, structure, instrumentation, mix and master. Then upload the song again, specifying the technical details such as key, BPM and chords, and look specifically for a singer in your accompanying text. You can also search for a singer in the acapellas section who fits the genre and mood and then use the message system to ask if they would like to sing your song. This takes a long time, but has worked for others. However, the prerequisite is that you first finish your work and do good preparatory work.

Manuela

Nice rhythmic part and a very nice intro and outro. You need lyrics and a good singer to complete the song. I suppose you work alone, so it is a common problem.
My regards, Anthony.

Please stop it, you killing me, I cant stop to shake me head lol )) , This is so GOOD bro, intro love it. Track is fire.

Are you should add some lyrics to this I don't know how you could have lost interest but I know what you mean though I like this right here. I like how you switch the percussion how you kept that old school reggaeton and then you take it out I like that that was cool.
Mean bass synths!! Dope!

I liked your principal idea, and of course this lively rhythm. I consider it as a short sample of your musical intention, which is really enjoyable.
Keep up the good work
Best wishes, Anthony

It is good i get a bit of a tropical vibe off it, great work

I like the beat and your electronic sounds

nice track Vic, good beat and melody, that kicks got some snap, nice synth highs good work

This sounds sweet on my speakers i like it thanks for sharing :)

I put out another one but it's more of a hip hop beat but it still reggaeton I think

Dope! That Melody is pretty creative man I like it! This genre really is your comfort zone

I just put out a reggaeton too as well when you get a chance gracias

So cool when you when you go back and you find some old projects that are unfinished but they are banging that's tight man! I see what you mean with the early 2000s with the ROMPE style sound. It's banging I think. Where's the vocals homie? Love the synth works! Ay papi nice with the vox and after that creative big-time. Club will be jumpin

Hello, I'm not sure how you would like to develop the song further. It's currently quite short. You did a good job with the intro, and the transition to the main part is also appealing. What follows, however, are essentially repetitions of the basic melody. For the short passage you posted, this works well and sounds pleasant. However, if you want to expand the song and add vocals, you'll need more variety, like chord changes or perhaps a prechorus... Otherwise, the tension could fade and the listener could lose interest.
Greetings, Manuela

Damn good job! Creative intro! Can't wait to hear with vocals that kick drum hits nice. Brilliant percussion! Professional sound quality l!

Nice track i dont understand the vocals but dont have to the music and vocals takes you on a journey that makes it all good. :)

Nice beat overall! U really vibe with her! Spanish rock in a way! Top notch quality

Hello, first of all let me say that your song is a beautiful and high-quality work! There's nothing to complain about *smile. The instruments are excellently selected and grouped. The rhythm section carries the song excellently without pushing it too hard and encourages you to dance. Great job Hats off! But as CC said, it's missing the foreground, the icing on the cake, the vocals or at least a melody part. If you add that in, it's really the top song!
Still, good solid work!
Best regards
Manuela