Hi! This track is splendid!!! I wanted to know if I would be able to use this track for a web series that I am currently writing. Please let me know if you would be interested. :)
Really like the vibe of this track, has alot of emotional energy
Feels a little rough on the edges though, its kind of like right when I start to get into it it changes jurassticly
The strings are really beautiful and the piano is well crafted great job on that!
As far as the beat though, I feel its a little too hard and subtracts more than it adds, I think pushing the treble back and pulling a little more of the bass would make it feel more.. natural? .. maybe.
But for rap/hip hop you definitely want that kick to be felt in your soul.
Also If it were me I wouldn't cut them out when the piano plays, cus they really add alot of value to this track, but using them in the background with longer note values would still let the piano maintain the spotlight without dropping that deep value you presented
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I hope my review is helpful and I'm grateful that you presented this for the community to listen to
The quality of the track is great and I can tell alot of work went into it
But there's no such thing as enough
And I hope you will continue to work on this piece, cus as is
Its still a diamond in the rough, at least to me it feels this way
yo leave that auto-tune alone this track is to hard for that the lyrics are hard as well at some parts the flow is of beat but im digging the lyrics but yea if you drop that auto-tune it will make the track darker but keep up the good work gus over all nice remix
yep this is a hit here. the beat is tight who ever produced it is top knotch. what i noticed is that most of the rappers kinda sounds like drake.
but they all on point. keep doing what u do.
when the verse starts i think this tracks is at it's best...i agree with minor about the trumpets may be a little too much...but this track got me charged...on some action adventure hero ish...keep it up fam
yo fam i like the drums on this joint...at times the string chords on the bottom conflict with the melody and the piano on the hook...that is unless of course that' what you were going for...the mix is superb though...everything is balanced on point...keep doin you fam...peace
you need to find your music style cause by listening to this i can hear that you are a bit confuse,at the beginin the melodic line was a good trance line but try to build your track on the same line.
dont give up the good work.
V.O
on Cry No More by SHPInc
I have someone that is interested in purchasing this track from you. Please let me know if you are interested.
Sincerely,
Tania Nicole
on Cry No More by SHPInc
Peace
on My Girl by SHPInc
on My Girl by SHPInc
Feels a little rough on the edges though, its kind of like right when I start to get into it it changes jurassticly
The strings are really beautiful and the piano is well crafted great job on that!
As far as the beat though, I feel its a little too hard and subtracts more than it adds, I think pushing the treble back and pulling a little more of the bass would make it feel more.. natural? .. maybe.
But for rap/hip hop you definitely want that kick to be felt in your soul.
Also If it were me I wouldn't cut them out when the piano plays, cus they really add alot of value to this track, but using them in the background with longer note values would still let the piano maintain the spotlight without dropping that deep value you presented
.
I hope my review is helpful and I'm grateful that you presented this for the community to listen to
The quality of the track is great and I can tell alot of work went into it
But there's no such thing as enough
And I hope you will continue to work on this piece, cus as is
Its still a diamond in the rough, at least to me it feels this way
Good luck and much respect
-fayz
on Life For Me by SHPInc
on My Crunk Version by SHPInc
on Crush On Me by SHPInc
John
on My Soul by SHPInc
Nice Arrangement
John
on To The Fullest by SHPInc
on How We Roll by SHPInc
on Shut Em Hater Down Remix by SHPInc
on Pretty Boi World by SHPInc
vocals need much more work.
maybe then people can stay awake and hear the music.
on I Am Going To Rip It by SHPInc
on I Am Going To Rip It by SHPInc
but they all on point. keep doing what u do.
DextDee
on You Are My Love by SHPInc
All The Best
John
on Back In The 80s by SHPInc
on Grime Me Harder by SHPInc
on This Is My Life by SHPInc
on I Am Going To Rip It by SHPInc
on I Am Going To Rip It by SHPInc
Greez DJ-DOUBLE
on I Am Going To Rip It by SHPInc
on The New Me by SHPInc
on The New Me by SHPInc
on Mr Mario by SHPInc
dont give up the good work.
V.O
on Mr Mario by SHPInc
Take these song's for example http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GJVtEQtq0Uc Armin van Buuren's Never say Never again
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mdZTRKBPzSA&annotation_id=annotation_841971&feature=iv Dj Tiesto's power mix
These traxz should give you a better idea of what trance could sound like.
Never forget the 4 on the floor and keep producing!
Dj Tiberus