If I had to be as critical as possible, the only thing I see is the length.
If this track were playing in a club, the length is perfect. But on a site I think the track would have had a greater impact if it were two 3 min tracks, which is the way "I" hear it.
Great track.
Oh, ok. I'm sort of new and know nothing about mixing, but I'll try to put what you said about the drums being too loud to work. Yeah, thanks for the feedback!
this is cool...groovy...synths are well driven as the mix...great electro...but what do you mean, "enough people make songs here on Looperman with Live" ???? don't understand...electro isn't a live genre as rock, punk, rnb, ska, fusion, pop...etc...
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Ok, i like to give honest feedback, so... are you ready for bad news?
As an extenuating circumstance, it can be said that, being your first attempt, a real masterpiece could not be expected, so the so-called "errors of youth" can be forgiven to you.
Now, put yourself in the listener's shoes: if I read that the genre is Drum and Bass, at least I expect a very marked, powerful and raised drumming section. And this is the first thing that in this track, I believe has not been sufficiently developed. Also, in the first part, very fast, you limited yourself to just making a few minor changes to the percussion. But the worst thing, which definitively ruins the whole track, is that you have chosen an acoustic main theme ALWAYS THE SAME!
There is no development, there is no variation, there are no contour elements, there are no support elements to "cover" any moments of emptiness.
Translation: after repeating the loop only three times, the brain skip it and the listener's attention level drops fearfully.
Unfortunately, the second part does not save the situation, because the change of speed, applied to a main theme that is still the same and identical to itself, honestly makes you want to stop listening to it.
I hope you will forgive me for being so bad at judging your work, but I'm not the type of person who just writes trivial things like "nice song", "I like your style" just to bring into view its track.
I am sure that if you listen to your track with your eyes closed, you will find that you can improve and enrich it, you just have to be patient and work on your music.
Don't be in a hurry to release, try harder, I'm sure you can do it better.
Hey, thanks for your feedback! I really thought about that, and I do see where you're coming from. It was pretty hard working with one-shots,(it's my first time with those too) and I'll admit I was rushing it a little bit. I just put some effects on the bass and put a little reverb on everything. But yeah, I should have done more. Thank you!
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This track is brilliant mate it just need some polish.
Well done.
on Dont Do It by Kronaz
If this track were playing in a club, the length is perfect. But on a site I think the track would have had a greater impact if it were two 3 min tracks, which is the way "I" hear it.
Great track.
PEACE...
on Dont Do It by Kronaz
The drop drums are loud though and it drowns the bass, you can also put an arp or maybe a skank on the drop to add more grooviness.
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Danke
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fistbump, Danke
on first try at dnb by Kronaz
on first try at dnb by Kronaz
Danial
on first try at dnb by Kronaz
As an extenuating circumstance, it can be said that, being your first attempt, a real masterpiece could not be expected, so the so-called "errors of youth" can be forgiven to you.
Now, put yourself in the listener's shoes: if I read that the genre is Drum and Bass, at least I expect a very marked, powerful and raised drumming section. And this is the first thing that in this track, I believe has not been sufficiently developed. Also, in the first part, very fast, you limited yourself to just making a few minor changes to the percussion. But the worst thing, which definitively ruins the whole track, is that you have chosen an acoustic main theme ALWAYS THE SAME!
There is no development, there is no variation, there are no contour elements, there are no support elements to "cover" any moments of emptiness.
Translation: after repeating the loop only three times, the brain skip it and the listener's attention level drops fearfully.
Unfortunately, the second part does not save the situation, because the change of speed, applied to a main theme that is still the same and identical to itself, honestly makes you want to stop listening to it.
I hope you will forgive me for being so bad at judging your work, but I'm not the type of person who just writes trivial things like "nice song", "I like your style" just to bring into view its track.
I am sure that if you listen to your track with your eyes closed, you will find that you can improve and enrich it, you just have to be patient and work on your music.
Don't be in a hurry to release, try harder, I'm sure you can do it better.
-Kronaz
on first try at dnb by Kronaz