well for one , I can Hear You Just Starting Out ( If Not Sorry ) . You Were On The Right Path But You Have to learn How To Quantize Your Drum Tracks ........but don't worry , Cause I Hear Imperfection In a Lot Of My Music....And Also Top Producers......Peace ....Keep it Up........
Sorry for the double review, but I can't contact you! My cousin and I would love to sing the song if you would let us. We'll have it to you by today. Oh I'm so excited! My cousin and I are bouncing off the walls! Thanks!
yo i really really like this beat im a mc... i like ur style wanna know if you can make some more beats like this ..this beat is real hip hop not like half the stuff on this site let me know hit me up at deframe69@gmail.com
(Intro)(Start 17 sec.) I feel like I'm in a cocoon waiting to become rest of the world, rest of the beauty in this world,
just take me take me take me away take me take me take me away I shall go,
hiding, hiding away from it all, waiting to be freed by my prince who loves me, just please please take me,
Take me take me away, just please please away away, once more to see my love flying in the sky above,
Above above above above, to my love oh way above, beyond the horizon I shall see him, just take me away
Seeing him, I am so free, free with all the love can be, flying flying so so high, way up in the bright blue sky,
Flying in the great green land, trees and the almighty sand loving me as it were before, taking me once more.
(Pause)
Love me as you did before, just once more, flying in the sky once more, just like we did before, flying up so so high, in this blue diamond sky, life just passes me by, like love in winter's sky.
(verses mix, lower verse in the back same thing as before)
Take me away from here, just take me, just take me, oh my love, flying in the skys above,oh my love, oh my love,
(Back verse still repeats)
My cocoon breaks, wings appear, the beauty of it all, like spring is whispering on,
Days by and by, and still I seem to fly, oh the winds breath of course, just like we did before,
Dancing, I go, on and on why I don't know why by and by,
My cocoon breaks, wings appear, the beauty of it all, like spring is whispering on,
Take me away from here, just take me, just take me, oh my love, flying in the skys above,oh my love, oh my love,
There ya go! Lyrics! Just find lady that can sing wonderfully. You don't have to use the lyrics. Oh and the ending needs to be a little polished. It's a cliff hanger, literally. But I love the song! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
My cousin and I are interested in singing these lyrics. Please contact me for more info.
Faving and downloading!
shojoBeast
wow thanks for the love. wish i could find someone to sing your lyrics but no one i know can sing lol. if you know anyone would like to use it feel free :)
Big, big beat. Really feeling that man. Good to see you're doing all sorts of styles too man. Only think I will say is the vocal stab in the verse is a little roughly cut. That's the only little thing that doesn't sound quite there. The rest is top quality fam.
PS: Maybe add a little reverb to it? Could help make the cut sound a little less sharp. Might be worth trying.
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on take me away by flawliss
just take me take me take me away take me take me take me away I shall go,
hiding, hiding away from it all, waiting to be freed by my prince who loves me, just please please take me,
Take me take me away, just please please away away, once more to see my love flying in the sky above,
Above above above above, to my love oh way above, beyond the horizon I shall see him, just take me away
Seeing him, I am so free, free with all the love can be, flying flying so so high, way up in the bright blue sky,
Flying in the great green land, trees and the almighty sand loving me as it were before, taking me once more.
(Pause)
Love me as you did before, just once more, flying in the sky once more, just like we did before, flying up so so high, in this blue diamond sky, life just passes me by, like love in winter's sky.
(verses mix, lower verse in the back same thing as before)
Take me away from here, just take me, just take me, oh my love, flying in the skys above,oh my love, oh my love,
(Back verse still repeats)
My cocoon breaks, wings appear, the beauty of it all, like spring is whispering on,
Days by and by, and still I seem to fly, oh the winds breath of course, just like we did before,
Dancing, I go, on and on why I don't know why by and by,
My cocoon breaks, wings appear, the beauty of it all, like spring is whispering on,
Take me away from here, just take me, just take me, oh my love, flying in the skys above,oh my love, oh my love,
There ya go! Lyrics! Just find lady that can sing wonderfully. You don't have to use the lyrics. Oh and the ending needs to be a little polished. It's a cliff hanger, literally. But I love the song! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
My cousin and I are interested in singing these lyrics. Please contact me for more info.
Faving and downloading!
shojoBeast
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Bells are good instruments.
Thanks
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So, just an effort and it will be really beautiful.
Thanks !
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PS: Maybe add a little reverb to it? Could help make the cut sound a little less sharp. Might be worth trying.
on together by flawliss
check for a completed song in 2 weeks at www.myspace.com/youngperry1993.
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