Minimal is not my thing but i try to give my feedback more honest i can. Technically, there is no thing to fix. Maybe a little bit the high frequencies in the drums, but is not so important. I don't know if is a minimal prerogative to be repetitive (and, also, a bit boring) but if not, try some variations, to keep the listener's brain active.
I like this. This synth is really pleasing on the speakers and ears. It's simple but well put together. Nice. I agree with DJSLTUK, I think more ear candy and some automations/drops would finish it well. :)
Hey, welcome to the wonderful world of dance and loop making. Listen to DJ STL UK, he knows what he is doing, and he is spot on about the percussion. You want to keep the listener or dancer engaged over the whole track, so you have to add things and take some things away to keep their attention. Do you listen to house? I have found over the years that listening to other great artists' work gives me a perspective on how and what they achieved in there work. Good luck, nice job on this early stuff.
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