I like your background track but the vocals don't fit very well at all. This would be markedly better if you used some pitch correction software on the vocals to make them fit the track OR just play with the notes in the background track to make them fit the vocals.
Thanks D3RELICT. I'm taking your suggestion seriously and I'm currently working on the pitch and the notes. I will update soon. Thanks for an honest critique.
Love the white noise in the intro. Bass is amazingly dynamic in the mix. The Rap reminds me of early early "Aussie" rap like this... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o9Gj8earX_w&html5=1
very interesting and nice professional mix.
cru
Cru. Thanks for checking this out. Glad you noticed the dynamics of the bass (it is quite dynamic). Amazing how a track can become far more dynamic when compression is used to your liking. Just having fun making traX here in NC.
Grotesk electronical piece...:-)
Interesting to hear this 'rapish' speech and the electro music together and not bad but I would imagine a vocal harmony for the chorus maybe...but it's just my taste...
Nice use of the synth and the whole track's gotta unique mood...
Hey Danke, thx for your comment. Not sure what U had in mind about the vocal harmony on the chorus runs. I used these Grotesk vocals from this site and tried not to over do the processing. I gave certain parts a bit of stereo spread and kept the chorus harmonies to a minimum since Grotesk had some reverb (or room reflections) in the original...each layer I added seemed to amp up the reverb/reflections fx which was unwanted. I like a dry, breathable, full vox range recording to work with...it allows me to add/subtract fx as needed and its priceless for making good sounding harmonies without too much processing.
This is pretty cool mate. Like the lyrics, reminds me of the guy from The Stranglers.
Like the structure of the tune and the mix is good as well.
This one's definitely going in my favourites.
FR
Thx FR for listening and not being inconvenienced with leaving a comment. Not familiar with the guy from The Stranglers but maybe Grotesk knows of him. Thx for the fav also. Grotesk is a looperman member, I created the music track and worked in the Grotesk vocals.
Hey TD thanks for listening and posting a comment to this one. Patricia should be on a recording label (IMHO) and on my satellite radio-the "Heart & Soul" channel to be specific. Lots of talent here just waiting to be discovered.
cool mix going on here, good use of vocals that blends in well with your music, love the beats and the vibe you got going on, one could well here this on the radio.. like it a lot. Mickey
Thanks for the comment Mickey...I agree mixing vocals is a challenge but I'm having a great time learning the do's n don'ts. You said "let's have more"...well I just finished another track with the same artist (ImDangerous) and it should be up in a bit. I'll stop in and see what you been up to as well.
Hello SM1,
Thx a lot for the wink . If you're happy with my stuff, that's cool .
Your music's great and has got a potential . And I understand how difficult it is to make pellas fit an instrumental track . You managed rather well here .
Thank you for sharing ;)
Thanks Janis for the nice words. Feedback from the vocalist is so appreciated. I agree it's sometimes difficult pairing a pella to an instrumental (esp. when vocals need stretching) but the vocals give me inspiration.
Thx Bonez. I wasn't sure bout the hip-hop genre when I posted it but this genre is always evolving so I just put it here to see what happens. This is the 4th mix I did and after adding Vashelite's "Into the Scene"...VOILĂ€! Thx again.
Hey Styles. I really like what you did with my vocals on this, man. Thanks a million. Can you send me a copy to my email? gospedego@hotmail.com. I'd really appreciate it.
Hey Antranita, I'm glad u really liked what I did. You have an awesome vocal sound. Why are you not on my XM radio yet? A pleasure to produce. Check ur email. Thanks for commenting.
Not bad at all , but you should use also a melody , the bass and the drums make it kind empty , but i really like what you did :) Just missing few staffs .
Great work mate. Didn't think you'll pull it off as good as this as it's sometimes difficult syncin' vocals. However, you done great work with the vocals to go with your melody and track. Haven't been uploading vocals as much but will do very soon, new ones in months to come.
Thanks for the review One Dark Angel. It means a lot to us unknown producers to hear what you guys think of our work with your vocals. I will admit the syncing of these vocals did give me a challenge but patience and attention to the lyrics gave me what I needed to complete this project.
Im looking fwd to your new posts. I think you have a great vocal talent and I hope we can work together on some new projects.
Thanks for the encouragement John. Im not sure where I will end up on this one. I know I want to add a catchy lead just haven't found the right one. I got so caught up in the mesmerizing darker sounds and the drum trak that I stopped lookn for a lead. I think I will try to develop a guitar riff that is infectious and see where it goes.
HONESTLY WELL DONE ON WORKIN WITH THE ACAPELLA, SOUNDS REALLY GOOD BEAT IS REALLY GOOD TOO, I THINK MAYBE YOU SHSOULD HAVE A PART WHERE IT SLOWS DOWN AND ADAM IS EXTENDING HIS LYRICS SOMEHOW YOU KNOW BUT A JOB WELL DONE
Hey Im thinking seriously about your suggestion Im just not sure how to extend his lyrics without it being too repetitive, the lyrics u hear was all he posted. Get back to me with any ideas.
-Styles
HI SJsanjok. This is my original mix of MaxSy's acapella "Tequilla". I created this track and added her vocals. Im glad you like it...thanks for the listen and the review.
-Styles
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o9Gj8earX_w&html5=1
very interesting and nice professional mix.
cru
-Styles
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Steve
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Interesting to hear this 'rapish' speech and the electro music together and not bad but I would imagine a vocal harmony for the chorus maybe...but it's just my taste...
Nice use of the synth and the whole track's gotta unique mood...
All the best, Danke
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Like the structure of the tune and the mix is good as well.
This one's definitely going in my favourites.
FR
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Thx a lot for the wink . If you're happy with my stuff, that's cool .
Your music's great and has got a potential . And I understand how difficult it is to make pellas fit an instrumental track . You managed rather well here .
Thank you for sharing ;)
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wasnt what i was expecting for hip hop!!but i definitly wasnt disapointed!!
good show!!!
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-Styles
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-Styles
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Great work.
aka One Dark Angel
Im looking fwd to your new posts. I think you have a great vocal talent and I hope we can work together on some new projects.
-Styles
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Very,very good!
Allen
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