Don't know what kind of vibe you're going for but If it were my track, I'd get a big snare in there and a more constant hi-hat pattern to bring everything together. Hope that helps fam.
This track here is by far your best stuff. I think if you saw a few tutorials for FL Studio you would definately get a better feel for the type of music you want to put out. Until next time "Keep'em comin and Keep'em movin".
Yeah! This beat is off too. I like the pizzato. You could do a lot with this beat, like put some strings in it or some piano. "Keep'em comin and Keep'em movin".
The sample you used sounds like it was'nt going to the beat of the track or your drums are a little off beat. And there was no variation in the song. Just one long loop. But don't dispare my friend you can only get better. "Keep'em comin and Keep it movin".
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nice one
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that would be GREAT
i'll hit you back up once i finish
a track with it
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Strings were sick
that piano was nice too
gave it that dark vibe
you should put those keys
as a loop fam'
Overall dope track
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