notebookwarior

Damn i forgot all about this! still dope tho

Reminds me of Lil Wayne, One of my fav rappers; great song an' beat... I find the whistling at the chorus an interesting original idea, Strangely goes well with the juicy synth...

Ya this beat is wicked man.
You're vocals are smooth too, nice flow.
Excellent track, enjoyed it start to finish, keep it up!
Brent

why does this track sound like a phone is ringing in it?

It really throws things off to me but I guess I can deal with it.

I don't know how this would get you any romance from any female.

The high pitch vocal seems annoying after a few seconds.
compared with the "so called" rapping that seems like rapping one minute and reading the next.

get it together.

thanks

like the beat lyrics is str8 too good job man

The track is very good. Not sure if comedy is the right genre.

Well done all way round.

John

i like this alot.... keep it up

make the voice normal no loops in it and it will be better. the melody and rap is ok but the fx in the voice are not got sry 4 the bad english ;)

peace

You honestly can't be serious with this.

Really showing you didn't think this out before you took this to the mic.

First or not - if you gonna mix lyrics from different people at least have some flow with it. GEEZE.

Yeah, i really dig this bro, it is catchy as the flu...without all the bad side effects...i like how you came back in in the second part of the second verse your timing was on point with it...let me get a cup...

Good track bro considering it;s your 1st and the vox arent mastered it, it was clear that your mesg. came through in it...Try to just let your feelings hang out when you record...then compress and eq your vox and maybe add a couple adlibs here and there and you'll be real good...Just keep at it, kind of like shadow boxing, just compete with yourself because in the end you are your own worst enemy....

Yawn your flow is good your rap is weak as hell

yeah the music is smooth

enuff said

lol it reminds me of that one dude on dazed and confused, somethin about i keep gettin older and older and high school chicks stay the same. i hated high school, but i kinda miss it now. good flows man.

Like my good buddy donmega said :-)

Great piece of music my friend

All The Best

John

Good stuff. Great effects you put on it. What were the effects.

way to shop around for a beat
lyrics are perfect for the beat
a song for the bitches always get play from the hoes

IM FEELIN THIS BRUH, NICE SMOOTH RIDING BEAT, I SHOULDA GOT WIT U ON DIS ONE, BUT KEEP IT UP BRO....

This track is heat. you got the right idea. next time try and put a little effect on your main vocal track. then use a second main vocal, heavy effect, pan just off center and turn it down. then use some backing vocal tracks to emphasize your main. thanks for the review.

fire..good work.. i actually redid the whole thing and mastered it.. ill delete the second verse i did and then send you the new track via e-mail. so you can re record it or you can send me just your acapella and ill master it in on the song.. i dont like to do it thru looperman cuz the quality gets lowered when sharing.. just lemme kno man.. but yeah you sounded great homie!!
i gotta bunch of new tracks, just not on looper cuz the quality comes out nasty.. lol, so ill start sending you stuff thru e-mail and if you wonna get on the track just do so.. lol.. lets colab

ok club shiit
got some escorts dancing to this song
right now!!! thanks mannn

Nice job with this, this is a pretty catchy track, keep it up

man this track has got some real value in it. if you did some more mastering on the vocals, this could be gold. some of the lyrics arent my favorite but I see the message you are trying to get across and I agree with it completely. you got a good recorded voice man so keep on spittin that fire

Its aiight for a first track, try to express yourself more though... and maybe put some dubbles in, i always make mine to loud i havent perfected them yet. And less talking at the start like haha Lets Go or whatever.

Dubbles is where you record the send half of every line 2ice and make them a bit quiter, so sort of like and echo/reverb effect but sounds better... if you look at my song i wanna be a star youll be able to tell i have them in there. or u can do every 2nd line up to you...

dope track
real laid back
do that sh#t