Killick

Earlier I mentions removing some lows and some highs from your voice. You may want to consider using multi-band compression instead, and then dial back the low and mid compression level, increase the high compression band, and then add your reverb with the lows cut off. That will help brighter up your voice without losing the baritone features.

The musicianship is great, though I'm not really feeling my first knuckles bleed on my pick hand (guess I've listened to too much metal).

Nice work keep it up.

You have a good voice, though you may want to EQ out some to the lows and mids, add compression, then wet up the highs with reverb or delay (just a hint). Also, consider more compression on the master, to smash the channels together to give it more "liveness" (not to much though, quiet dynamics are better than a "brick").

You may want to consider adding so midrange to that lead guitar, and moving from a fuzz to more of a tube screamer tone (kinda blues it up).

Put YouLean or some similar tool on the master, then get the LUFS of the master around -10 to -14, without clipping, and you will get a much clearer louder master.

Just some food for thought, you asked for feedback.

Nice work. BTW, if you like to count, cover Catfood.

Cam, so right @ about 1:49 the change with the chord progression is highly impactful to my ears. Then the unison fullness guitar work and strings made this quite impressive. Drum mix is balanced to perfection and finally, the outro piano crowned this perfectly. Another great work.

Mark

Very nice cover! Clean sound, good strong vocals. Music sounds pretty on point, tells a story even without vocals. I think you'd nail some David Bowie, Pink Floyd maybe even some Crowded House covers.

in the higher ranges your voice is sensational, otherwise this theater rock sounds too good ... only the drums are a tad bit weak ... on my view ...
fistbump, Danke

Listened to this yesterday I think but u know how it is, sometimes you just don't have time or inclination to comment. If you hadn't said I'd never have known you'd had a few! Yeah those key changes must be hard but you've got that nailed.

It definitely worked!!You have a beautiful voice thats for sure.
i will never say this but for 1 time i do ....Take a drink if you make a track lol.
Compliments!!

Your voice sounds very fine to me - maybe you need to drink a lot more and try a pogues song. Not a huge fan of the song itself but you have a lovely sound production on it and it's sounding very polished - It's always good to try a wide variety of styles and see where different genres and forms take you I reckon : )

Like how that last note holds at the end.
this is you singing a tad drunk wow man this was something else was getting a greatest showman vibe off this great cover also and they way your vocals went up and down at first i thought u were out of key a tick at the bigining then i realised you were singing properly and to key wow again great work glad i listened.
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I don't really know the song, but it sounds like you were hitting the key changes (which as I'm sure you know is the hardest on the singer), so as far as singing goes sounds good to me. The whole thing is clean and well put together.

I am curious why you would want to do a cover. I kinda can't stand doing them, and if I'm not already booked at a bar knowing I have to cover 3 hrs (so maybe 20ish songs), I don't bother learning them, and if I do it's a very small amount of time per song (sometimes none at all, I just listen for the "nashville numbers" and call it "leart").

Hope that didn't seem cynical or something, I was just curious if it is practice, fun, both, or part of something that you are already doing anyway.

Like I said, good production, squeaky clean instrumentation.

Hi guy! I don't know this "cover", I wouldn't give you an opinion on your voice, I prefer female voices...but the work seems well done, even "stuffed" lol!
Michael

The emotion evoked feels like your trapped in a space ship and ground control has been disconnected. You've become isolated. I get Pink Floyd / 2001 A Space Odyssey imagery in my mind.

Wow that took me on an epic journey!

Wow...still listening as I write. Obviously much thought & talent went into the composition & instrument arrangement...very patient build and your vocal performance is totally on..the big space fits the atmosphere and instrument space..the instruments carry the rhythm nicely without percussion etc. Love the last section switch to the key prog and rich pad layers...superb piece of music Killick...fav....keep on...Ed

So much drama and power in this track, it's amazing! You really know how to fit music to your vocals, they really add up! The spacey ambientlike sounds in between keep it interesting and even mysterious at some points. Maybe at some point a bit of drums might even enhance the track even more but I understand that without it is very rich already. Thanks for sharing!

i love this lot of depeche mode sounds here of early days

Caramba ! meu querido, muito bom seu som.
desejo sucesso a você.
abraços

Cam this is epic, you've captured the ambient space and then some, this ain't no track, this is a PERFORMANCE, stunning. The aura your voice carries is incredible,angelic baritone,church like, the instrumentation from the synth pads and that guitar it's giving in so many ways the keys are charming and build you up slow stabbs, I hadn't planned on listening to 9.39 mins, but I rolled one, poured a scotch and settled down. I would have paid to watch that performance bro, high five, faved

Hey Cam.
This is a brilliant track mate.
Great track.
Well done mate.
Maj

Can, so this listen for me personally was simply “MAGNIFICENT”! From the vocal treatment to the guitar and then that majestic piano and synth work. And it’s genius how the lower synth notes maintained the tempo and kept everything moving nicely. Top production Cam.

Mark

Very special and great guitar work...beautifull!!

great guitar work on this. Kudos.

First things first. I can tell just by looking at the waveform you added more volume to you mix, that's a good thing!

Great intro, your vocals are strong and the dreaminess of the pad behind it is nice. The guitar adds the opposite of the pad, some gritty sound to oppose the pad. The piano is incredible. Epic song Cam, quite a pleasure to listen to!

I'll take a guess on who wrote the lyrics. Was it Eddie Vedder from Pearl Jam?

Take care!

Wayne

I think this is the first 9+min track I've listened to on LM.

Your Vocals are perfect (of course). The panning Synth at the beginning was a nice touch, it drew me into the track and wouldn't let me go. I really like your choice of Electric Grand as well as the other Keyboards and Pads.

The entire production is exquisite.

Great track. Faved..

PEACE...

high-concept, haha! way cool, this is gone thru the looking-glass strangeness of the finest kind. like medieval meta.