hey thanks for taking time to reply... yeah the vocals were Apple Garage Band's own. I just liked the vibe so posted it. I think I exhausted most of the good ones. Next time I'll be posting with a real rap!
I think this track works well mate
totaly 80's vibe yes but who cares ?
My only reservation would be on the drum. You may try to find another kit sound. I'm not a big fan of the type of sound you used.
But that's just my taste
Hey yeah, I thought it was more late 80's synth and drums with 70's bass.
The kit i used is Ujam Phat is the same guys who do BM hustle. Apparently they are supposed to be 70's. Most sound older mind. I'm probably gonna have to start making my own midi beats as nothing out the box cuts it!
I'm trying to find a wakka wakka or guitar VST that can pimp a song along. If you know of any, let me know! Thanks for your time!
Sounds good bro ! You got a good voice for rap and demonstrate pretty good control and timing. The music is good too, although the levels are pushed to the limits and I seemed to hear some clipping in spots. Not sure if its from the vocal or music track. I'm not any kind of authority in this area so there's not much more I can give you other than my approval in that it appears to be legit and sounds pretty tight production wise.
I like the vocal track. It's got a unique sound. Being in America, I hear your accent in the speaking, which adds an element that is cool. Overall, it sounds like this track is a vehicle to say something, rather than to display musical embellishments. I liked it!
Likely my fault with the lyrics. I'm touching on student tuition fees, leading to debt, that leads people into jobs (low paid) as they ain't given a proper wage. Modern business raises the bar high, demands a degree, but that's not enough.They want more, and offer less. So, we have a debt cycle and serfdom. Basically, to get a 'good' job - basically internship / entry level (one which may cover the bills) we have to comply, sell out. We have to learn a new language game, change ourselves etc.
I made a rap, was over 7 minutes. To split over two songs. Part one was about rising student fees. Now, a student can still owe up to 60k, 30 years after repayments. Also, that only 30% of students think its value for money (in my samples).
Second one is saying that after being in nearly lifelong debt, we have no other option but to buy-in to, and be a slave of the system. Freedom parchment paper relates to the degree certificate as well as freedom papers used pre/post slavery era. Kinda a modern comparison of similar type, but obviously no where near the same severity. It's also being ironic that degrees are supposed to set you free, actually they are the proof of being a slave to debt. At least that was my purpose
Lastly, I touch into modern business education makes people think a certain (neo liberal / sociopathic way) and we use these terms without thinking. Near the end I mention the IKEA key, which relates to students, being in massive debt, are not 'ready for business', so they're in life long debt - for what.
Most end up as interns on or earning less than minimum wage. Kinda a modern serfdom.
This sounds so industrial/new wave! I like the feel. Is it supposed to be so distorted? If so, it's an interesting effect that adds to the composition.
Hey ClickBaitCabaret. I wish it was big budget, I'm new to production. I just moved around the percussion and drums around to give more of a complete sound.
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totaly 80's vibe yes but who cares ?
My only reservation would be on the drum. You may try to find another kit sound. I'm not a big fan of the type of sound you used.
But that's just my taste
The kit i used is Ujam Phat is the same guys who do BM hustle. Apparently they are supposed to be 70's. Most sound older mind. I'm probably gonna have to start making my own midi beats as nothing out the box cuts it!
I'm trying to find a wakka wakka or guitar VST that can pimp a song along. If you know of any, let me know! Thanks for your time!
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Well done.
Jamid
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Wow, great track mate,
Wonderful track.
Well done
Jamid
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i like that
i didn't understand the lyrics mate but i like what you wrote
Keep on good job !!
I made a rap, was over 7 minutes. To split over two songs. Part one was about rising student fees. Now, a student can still owe up to 60k, 30 years after repayments. Also, that only 30% of students think its value for money (in my samples).
Second one is saying that after being in nearly lifelong debt, we have no other option but to buy-in to, and be a slave of the system. Freedom parchment paper relates to the degree certificate as well as freedom papers used pre/post slavery era. Kinda a modern comparison of similar type, but obviously no where near the same severity. It's also being ironic that degrees are supposed to set you free, actually they are the proof of being a slave to debt. At least that was my purpose
Lastly, I touch into modern business education makes people think a certain (neo liberal / sociopathic way) and we use these terms without thinking. Near the end I mention the IKEA key, which relates to students, being in massive debt, are not 'ready for business', so they're in life long debt - for what.
Most end up as interns on or earning less than minimum wage. Kinda a modern serfdom.
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